That.... that was very powerful. You didn't have much time and length to work with but you made it work for your writing. It brought very visceral feelings forward in me as I read. It was so beautiful and tragic. You are a very talented writer. Thank you for sharing this. Thank you.
urka511 t1_itk0zpx wrote
Reply to comment by Obtuse_Mongoose in [WP] You are suddenly transported to the oldest time of your country's history, and you discover that you are immortal, indestructible, infinitely patient and strong, have access to all of humanity's future knowledge, and can summon any object from your timeline. You set out to change the world. by socron_gaelith
That.... that was very powerful. You didn't have much time and length to work with but you made it work for your writing. It brought very visceral feelings forward in me as I read. It was so beautiful and tragic. You are a very talented writer. Thank you for sharing this. Thank you.