This is so good, the dark ass rainy ass night and the purple lightning was so visual I loved every sentence of it. I totally should have seen the Johnny twist coming but it snuck right past me, very well done, and I’m not Filipino but I love all the cultural details you include it really grounds it so well. I like how every character feels distinct even with such minimal description and the black shark ua genuinely menacing even after the reveal. Fire ass story.
That being said I hope you somehow make it out alive OP you are in my prayers🙏
thatbossdogfish t1_j3ysta0 wrote
Reply to There's something stalking the seas by MrFrontenac
This is so good, the dark ass rainy ass night and the purple lightning was so visual I loved every sentence of it. I totally should have seen the Johnny twist coming but it snuck right past me, very well done, and I’m not Filipino but I love all the cultural details you include it really grounds it so well. I like how every character feels distinct even with such minimal description and the black shark ua genuinely menacing even after the reveal. Fire ass story.
That being said I hope you somehow make it out alive OP you are in my prayers🙏