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testingtestingtestin t1_j5v6wz9 wrote
Reply to In 1971, three cosmonauts Dobrovolski, Volkov, and Patsayev passed away due to a valve malfunction in the Soyuz 11 capsule. They remain the only people who have passed away above the Kármán Line - the defining line of space. by sciencekenyon
Whoever wrote that article needs to find a new job. It reads like a 14 year old was given a space essay for school.
Edit: from the downvote, and looking at their history, I’m gonna assume OP wrote the article. Sorry for upsetting you, but I do stand by my original comment - the writing in the article is very poor.
testingtestingtestin t1_j5whsn2 wrote
Reply to comment by [deleted] in In 1971, three cosmonauts Dobrovolski, Volkov, and Patsayev passed away due to a valve malfunction in the Soyuz 11 capsule. They remain the only people who have passed away above the Kármán Line - the defining line of space. by sciencekenyon
No, it isn’t. It’s full of grammatical errors and spurious punctuation, has no flow and I’d already read several sentences that either didn’t make sense or required multiple readings to grasp the point the author was making before I gave up.
This sentence is a good example of one that wouldn’t be accepted in a high school essay:
>Whilst the boundary between the Earth’s atmosphere and space is of course a blurred one, much of the international scientific community agrees on the 100km Kármán line, but, as it is with many ‘international’ measurements, does not apply to the US.
I’m honestly amazed it doesn’t start with “the dictionary defines space as….”