smootyman69 t1_ixz8din wrote on November 27, 2022 at 3:32 PM Reply to comment by Nazer_the_Lazer in [WP] The research facility has been overrun. A lone scientists barricaded in his office readies a pistol to take as many of them with him as he can, but is shocked to see he is a naturally extremely skilled shooter. He begins singlehandedly reclaiming the entire complex where the guards failed. by Epictauk Good stuff. I really like how you described them looking around as trying to crack their necks but not finding the right angle. Solid foreshadowing with the vats at the beginning too. Permalink Parent 15
smootyman69 t1_ixz8din wrote
Reply to comment by Nazer_the_Lazer in [WP] The research facility has been overrun. A lone scientists barricaded in his office readies a pistol to take as many of them with him as he can, but is shocked to see he is a naturally extremely skilled shooter. He begins singlehandedly reclaiming the entire complex where the guards failed. by Epictauk
Good stuff. I really like how you described them looking around as trying to crack their necks but not finding the right angle. Solid foreshadowing with the vats at the beginning too.