shiver23
shiver23 t1_j6012tm wrote
Reply to comment by Mooses_little_sister in [WP] Your superpower isn’t anything special. You can make stuff disappear behind your back then pull it back out again. When a friend at a party asks you to do it to them it sounds like a great laugh. But when you pull them back out they look older, disheveled, and are frantic to be sent back. by A_GOOD_NINJA
I love the story and I really appreciate that Alex uses they/them pronouns. I think this is the first time I've read a piece of fiction where it's included so organically. You also managed to create a believable and complex friendship in only a few paragraphs.
shiver23 t1_j601kah wrote
Reply to comment by Skyblade12 in [WP] Your superpower isn’t anything special. You can make stuff disappear behind your back then pull it back out again. When a friend at a party asks you to do it to them it sounds like a great laugh. But when you pull them back out they look older, disheveled, and are frantic to be sent back. by A_GOOD_NINJA
This one hit me somewhere emotionally and I really appreciate your talent.