lokilivewire
lokilivewire t1_ja80msk wrote
I used that technique on one of my early books. I couldn't think of a better way to tell the story. The feedback I got from readers was they really enjoyed the alternating POV. Especially when I would have both characters describe the same event. It gave them a richer overview of what was happening.
Not sure I'll use it again. All depends on the story. Sometimes it just works.
lokilivewire t1_ja827yh wrote
Reply to Reading Aloud by juicy_scooby
If this how you read and you're enjoying reading, that's all that matters. How you do it, silently or reading out aloud is irrelevant.
FWIW I would focus more on what makes me happy, than what anyone might think.