humble_nomad

humble_nomad OP t1_j22rt26 wrote

I absolutely loved the creative way you introduced the story, and feel you did an amazing job in really fleshing out a heavy tone to match the situation. It was really clever how you explained why the meteorite hadn't been noticed until it was too late.

The last part of the story felt a little rushed once you introduced the fae, but it tracks that the fae only saved the planet for personal reasons. Haha Overall, I enjoyed the read - thanks for posting!

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