calormillesoles t1_j8k1z9t wrote on February 14, 2023 at 9:47 PM Reply to comment by Smash-Sailing-1492 in This Norfolk Southern ad backfired Ohio Train Explosion by Smash-Sailing-1492 It would be ok if you put a colon after backfired. As it is written it reads like the Ohio train explosion was backfired from the ad. Permalink Parent 2
calormillesoles t1_j8k1z9t wrote
Reply to comment by Smash-Sailing-1492 in This Norfolk Southern ad backfired Ohio Train Explosion by Smash-Sailing-1492
It would be ok if you put a colon after backfired. As it is written it reads like the Ohio train explosion was backfired from the ad.