WayyTooAce t1_j4xkvtb wrote on January 18, 2023 at 11:31 PM Reply to comment by Murlock_Holmes in [WP] You, the God of War, are on a rampage across a battlefield. As you face down a terrified army, a small chihuahua charges out from them, and does its' best attempt at a howl at you. by JacobJamesTrowbridge Small thing , very small but at the start so I had i hard time ignoring it. I think was and what is switched in the first sentence. Very good no matter what Permalink Parent 10
WayyTooAce t1_j4xkvtb wrote
Reply to comment by Murlock_Holmes in [WP] You, the God of War, are on a rampage across a battlefield. As you face down a terrified army, a small chihuahua charges out from them, and does its' best attempt at a howl at you. by JacobJamesTrowbridge
Small thing , very small but at the start so I had i hard time ignoring it. I think was and what is switched in the first sentence.
Very good no matter what