Sl0thCh1ld t1_j89gqm9 wrote on February 12, 2023 at 5:31 PM Reply to comment by Krutaun in [WP] Every once in a while the luck a Guardian angel uses to make your life better runs out. That's the days recalled with "but wait, it gets worse." Your guardian angel was stalled for a week getting back with new luck and your life will not be the same. by LynxInSneakers This is great, there were a few parts that you bounce between past and present tense that confused me a little, but it's the best piece I've read this week. Permalink Parent 2
Sl0thCh1ld t1_j89gqm9 wrote
Reply to comment by Krutaun in [WP] Every once in a while the luck a Guardian angel uses to make your life better runs out. That's the days recalled with "but wait, it gets worse." Your guardian angel was stalled for a week getting back with new luck and your life will not be the same. by LynxInSneakers
This is great, there were a few parts that you bounce between past and present tense that confused me a little, but it's the best piece I've read this week.