Roxith
Roxith OP t1_jdkm7e1 wrote
Reply to comment by Shalidar13 in [WP] Time stops as a girl with red eyes walks past crowds of people, stabbing one man before giving another person the knife. She starts walking away until you sneeze. by Roxith
Beautiful story. I loved how you set the stage and described her appearance. :)
Roxith OP t1_jdlbb0p wrote
Reply to comment by WhiteNight2505 in [WP] Time stops as a girl with red eyes walks past crowds of people, stabbing one man before giving another person the knife. She starts walking away until you sneeze. by Roxith
Nice story! Your characters have a lot of personality. Their conversations were very smooth between them. It wasn’t awkward but flowed naturally.