FarsLasagne

FarsLasagne OP t1_iu5uiqk wrote

The whole vicious mockery thing was a very interesting Way to incoperate the bully aspect! And i mean that in a good way, very creative!

There seems to be a typo? It says in one sentence “until one day i domed my bully” which is confusing, Maybe i just forgot a Word tho.

Other than that its super great! I felt a Lot of personality in the Way you wrote it!

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