It's been a couple months since I started making music and my friends challenged me to make a hip-hop song. Any feedback/advice would be appreciated!

https://soundcloud.com/bekwon1/gucci

I just started making music a little over a month ago and and my friends challenged me to make a The Kid Laroi-esque song. Any feedback/advice would be greatly appreciated!
https://soundcloud.com/bekwon1/rollercoaster