AmbulatorySushi
AmbulatorySushi t1_jdiomqg wrote
Reply to comment by sadnesslaughs in [WP] Last week you found an old sword in a box. When the blade was unsheathed it spoke to you, recounting its history. It declared you bearer of the mythical talking sword of Babel, and that you are bound together until death. Unfortunately, the sword is incredibly irritating and won’t shut up. by DiRumgega
This is good! One small criticism, the hilt is the handle of the sword, I think the word you're looking for is sheathe. The sheathe is what the sword slides into to cover the blade.
Nice job though, I like the story.
AmbulatorySushi t1_jdfvnkl wrote
Reply to comment by SilasCrane in [WP] Prophets and seers don't HAVE to give musings and warnings of the future in vague, riddling, or purposefully misleading ways. They mostly only do that when the people who come to them are being arrogant jerks or when someone knowing their actual happy end will cause that end to not happen. by archtech88
I really like this one! Well done, thank you for posting.
AmbulatorySushi t1_j7xpgci wrote
Reply to comment by Starwhisker in [WP] The first night of your 18th birthday, you wake up in the bed of someone attracted to you. It’s a well known phenomena, and the world has adjusted to it. You, however, have woken in a dark void. by P-o-t-a-t-o-o
Oh my gosh, this is so sweet! I wasn't expecting this kind of take and it honestly made me tear up. Fantastic little story, thank you for posting it. ❤️
AmbulatorySushi t1_jdkm2x3 wrote
Reply to comment by sadnesslaughs in [WP] Last week you found an old sword in a box. When the blade was unsheathed it spoke to you, recounting its history. It declared you bearer of the mythical talking sword of Babel, and that you are bound together until death. Unfortunately, the sword is incredibly irritating and won’t shut up. by DiRumgega
No worries!