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phizzlek t1_itouq3q wrote

You’re telling me you didn’t cringe at “yeeted itself coherent to my vector”!?

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Cthonos t1_itpriuw wrote

Agreed, the whole post is overwritten

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phizzlek t1_itpty7g wrote

It has ‘school creative writing class’ vibes. People seem to love this on Reddit though so perhaps we’re out of touch!

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Cthonos t1_itq0j48 wrote

Think you've hit the nail on the head with that, maybe half of the posts I see on here make me cringe; they feel like they were written by edgy 14 year olds.

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MarudePoufte t1_itouwcb wrote

Haha sure, but I’m assuming that was for the young readers? Otherwise I thought it was great

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mrmike5157 t1_itpn26x wrote

Agreed, I’m still trying to chew up and swallow that unfortunate phrase. Otherwise an entertaining story. (;

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