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Ok-Landscape-4430 t1_irhrn4c wrote

WHEN REAL BOSS ENTERS THE GAME

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Ok-Landscape-4430 t1_irhwbsc wrote

You know what is wrong with my edit why it's getting downvotes. Its my first edit if you can't upvote but don't be an asshole

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EpicGains t1_irhypro wrote

C’mon tho, even the sentence is off. Like the font?

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Ok-Landscape-4430 t1_iri5b2d wrote

Ok practice make a man perfect. This was my first try might make some more later

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Ok-Landscape-4430 t1_iri5gm2 wrote

I thought font could be used as to show scaredness. Looks like it didn't work

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pimp-bangin t1_iriz1fs wrote

Yeah that font has more of like a Texas/cowboy vibe or maybe like a baseball feel to it (looks a little bit like the Red Sox font). I see what you were going for now that you mention it, but yeah I don't think it quite works.

I thought the concept as a whole was funny though.

Keep at it and keep on believing in yourself

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FlamingButterfly t1_iriuawy wrote

Getting defensive about it doesn't help you, ask others for advice and see if they can offer ways to improve.

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DrSmurfalicious t1_iri7s3p wrote

There's nothing wrong with it and it deserves upvotes. The font is a bit hard to read is all. It's a funny concept. Keep contributing to future posts.

What I do have a problem with is the comment I'm replying to. That first sentence is clearly a statement but it feels like it wants to be, or should be, a question.

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pimp-bangin t1_irizcj7 wrote

English is clearly not their first language so I didn't interpret their first sentence that way at all, I read it as "what is wrong with my edit? Why is it getting down votes?" Gotta give people the benefit of the doubt sometimes.

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Ok-Landscape-4430 t1_irhwfse wrote

Shit i was really looking forward to see people reaction and here I really am feeling those reactions

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arond3 t1_irhwx3q wrote

Since nobody did i'll try :

  • the idea is ok.
  • the result is probably not on par with what people expext on this sub.
  • to make the joke funnier you may have added the shadow of a human.

Edit : at first glance i didn't saw the band aid on the dog and the base ball bat.

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Huskatta t1_iri0op2 wrote

Well, I for one found it pretty funnny and lighthearted. Upvote from this boy.

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KaeptnKaese t1_iri53mb wrote

Maybe something broken, like put them in front of a different background and edit a broken window in the back.

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SaScrewaround t1_irijllz wrote

I think that was why the other dog has a band-aid on its nose. My guess though

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Huskatta t1_iri0q70 wrote

I liked it so much I actually chuckled.

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ranchwriter t1_iri3s6d wrote

This is adorable. Like starting random fires or watching a kitten get eaten by wild boar.

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Ok-Landscape-4430 t1_iri57c9 wrote

Im not native english speaker so can i assume this is sarcasm or a joke or some real pleasure

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Mr-Gnorts t1_irib83e wrote

Seems to be a joke? I'm a native English speaker and even I'm confused lol

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