Submitted by Horror_writer_1717 t3_zc30ts in nosleep

I lay on a table next to a roaring fire. My hands were bound, and I was surrounded by figures in black robes. The beautiful young woman who looked like she was still in her teens approached me holding a nasty-looking knife encrusted with jewels.

“Please don’t do this,” I said.

She flashed a wicked grin and raised the knife over me, holding her breath for a moment before she plunged it toward my chest.

***

Twelve hours earlier…

I’d never been a big fan of trucks. Why I drove one for a living was beyond me. I think it started out like so many other things. You just think you’ll do it for a while and the next thing you know ten years have passed and you’re still doing the same thing.

If this story was just about letting time slip away because I was too scared or too complacent to make a change, this would be a very boring story indeed. But it’s not.

There are many people who see things they shouldn’t or more to the point who see things they wish they hadn’t. Most of these people make a choice to bury the forbidden memory deep in their subconscious and never think of it again. They cope through any number of methods including drugs, alcohol, or other means. If they can’t cope with it they leave a note, a grieving family, and a lot of questions.

One of the reasons they choose not to tell anyone about their experience is being labeled. Crackpot, conspiracy theorist, lunatic, those are some of the nicer things these unfortunate souls get called. Then there’s the censoring and blacklisting. Oh, it’s all very subtle so as not to be discovered. But that doesn’t make it any less real.

My story started on a bright, sunny day when it seemed like nothing could possibly go wrong.

That should’ve been my first clue.

But how could I have expected any less? Driving down the country road with the window down, the sun shining, a balmy eighty degrees outside, the music blaring from the radio as I sang along desperately trying to stay in key. The fields were full of vegetables in their prime growing cycle. It was like everything was perfect for that one moment.

I just wish that moment could’ve lasted.

When my front passenger’s side tire blew, my good feelings were shattered.

I went ten rounds with the steering wheel trying to keep the truck on the road, but it was futile. Finally, having no other option, I yanked the wheel hard toward the left. It teetered on the edge of balance for a moment before the wheel bit into the asphalt. Going 55 when the wheel dug in was catastrophic. The truck suddenly turned into a gymnast doing a routine on the mat.

Fortunately, I had already delivered my parts for the day. If not, I would’ve worried about a driveshaft or a transmission flying through the plywood wall that separates the cab from the back of the box truck and turning me into a bloody pancake.

I think I had enough to worry about as the truck flew through the air, taking me with it.

Everything seemed to move in slow motion as the truck’s momentum turned it sideways and started it rolling. I had no idea how many times it flipped, I just knew how hard I was praying and how tightly I gripped the steering wheel.

When it finally stopped and settled, the truck was sitting back on its wheels. I thanked God for small favors, and for keeping me safe.

I won’t say I went unhurt. When you’re flipping through the air, everything in the cab becomes a missile. I got hit by my water bottle, my bag of potato chips, my phone, even my lunchbox tagged me a couple of times. I was sure I would have bruises when I got home.

After the truck settled, I turned off the engine, unbuckled my seat belt, and slowly climbed out of the cab.

My first few steps were tentative, making sure everything worked and nothing was broken. After I stretched and felt around for injuries, I took a slow lap around the truck.

Three of the four tires were flat, with the rear driver’s side being the only holdout. There was dripping coming from underneath that seemed like different liquids mixed together.

I decided it would be a good idea to get whatever I was going to salvage out of the cab quickly just in case one of those liquids happened to be gasoline.

I grabbed everything I could and went down the road fifty yards or so before setting the armful of stuff down on the berm.

I sat down in the grass along the road and looked at the truck. I could see the top had been bent. It looked comical as if it was leaning over and needed help to stand up straight.

Thinking of that reminded me that I needed help. The road wasn’t very well traveled. It was a two-lane country road I had been driving on for nearly an hour and I hadn’t passed more than a handful of cars.

I dug through my pile of rescued items and found my phone. I really wish I hadn’t. The screen was splintered. I tried to turn it on, but it was no use. I wouldn’t be calling anyone with it ever again.

I looked up the road and down, but all I could see were endless miles of corn growing in the field. I hadn’t seen a house for a while so I decided I would walk in the direction I had been going.

I gathered what was useful and stowed it in my pockets. The rest went in my lunchbox and off I went looking every bit like a kid walking home from school.

The walk worked the stiffness out of my limbs and revealed whatever injuries I had were minor.

It had been twenty minutes and I was beginning to wonder if anyone lived on this road when out of nowhere a house appeared. It looked old and run down, but it was better than nothing. I turned up the long driveway, hoping the residents were friendly and I wasn’t about to have my torso redecorated with buckshot.

Just then I passed a ‘no trespassing’ sign nailed to a tree beside the driveway.

I hesitated and considered turning back to look for the next house when I saw a man coming towards me on a tractor. It was already too late.

He pulled up beside me and killed the engine. He was big, wearing overalls, which he filled with a belly, but I could see bulging arms from a lifetime of hard work. His silent stare made me feel the most uncomfortable I had in a long time.

“Afternoon,” I said, waiting for some response.

He continued staring as if I were some alien being that had wandered onto his property.

“I had a little accident back the road a couple of miles and I was wondering if I could use your phone to call a tow truck.”

He leaned over and spit off the side of the tractor.

“That so?” he said.

“Yeah, unfortunately,” I said. “A tire blew out on me, and I lost control.”

“Huh,” he said.

He eyed me up and down, making me feel more than a little uncomfortable, then started the tractor and turned it back toward the house without a word.

Since I was still alive and hadn’t heard any banjos playing, I decided this was his idea of a yes. I followed along behind the tractor as we headed toward the house.

Not once did he look back to see if I was following. When he got to the front of the house he yelled inside.

“Darlene!”

Immediately an overweight, middle-aged woman appeared in the doorway wearing a ragged dress with an apron over it.

“This fella says he was in an accident down the road and needs to call a tow truck,” the man said.

“But the phone… “ she started but was instantly silenced by a glare from the man.

She hung her head.

“She’ll show you where the phone is,” the man told me.

Then he drove away on the tractor.

“I’m sorry for any inconvenience, ma’am,” I said.

“It’s no trouble,” she said looking up but not meeting my eyes. “The phone’s in here.”

She stepped inside and held the door open for me to follow. The inside of the house was a stark contrast to the outside. It was clean and very well-kept. I was surprised to see the portraits hanging on the wall had no dust on them at all.

She led me down a hallway that ended in an immaculate kitchen. It was like someone had dropped it here straight out of a fifties TV show. I was so busy taking in the pristine condition of the room that I completely missed the phone hanging on the wall.

She turned and pointed it out to me. I reached for it but wiped off my hands before picking it up so I wouldn’t leave any marks.

When I put it up to my ear, I heard a strange sound I couldn’t identify, but no dial tone. I clicked the receiver a few times but still got no dial tone.

“It’s not working,” I said.

She took the phone from me and tried to use it but was unsuccessful as well.

“I apologize,” she said gently hanging the phone back on its cradle. “The storm must’ve knocked it out.”

“What storm?” I said.

She hesitated.

“We had a storm last night and lost power,” she said avoiding my eyes. “It must’ve taken out the phones as well.”

“Didn’t you know about this before?”

“We don’t use the phone much,” she said. “If you hadn’t come, I might not have known it until tomorrow or the next day.”

“Wow,” I said. “I can’t imagine going days without using my phone.”

“I… I mean we don’t really have that many people to call,” she said twisting her apron into a knot.

“Maybe I should try another house,” I said. “Their phone might be working.”

“I doubt it,” she said. “But you’re welcome to try. Our nearest neighbor is three miles down the road.”

The thought of walking another three miles held no appeal to me, but if their phone was working and I could get a ride out of here it would be worth it. There was something odd going on here and I didn’t want to be part of it. In the back of my mind, the banjo players were tuning up.

“That’s fine,” I said. “Would you mind if I use your bathroom before I go?”

“Oh no, not at all,” she said brightening. “It’s the second door on your left.”

Her sudden mood swing gave me the distinct impression she didn’t want me here. I had no desire to be anyplace I’m not wanted, so no problem with me. I stepped into the bathroom and was once again impressed by the pristine nature of everything in the room. I felt almost sacrilegious using the toilet.

When I was done, I washed my hands. As I glanced in the mirror, I saw a shadow move from the window behind me. I’d swear someone had just been looking in.

I dried my hands and tried to put the towel back exactly where it was before exiting the room. I stepped out and nearly ran into the man.

“Did you make your call?” he said.

“Couldn’t, the phone’s not working.”

“Hm,” he said.

“I was going to walk down to your neighbor’s house and see if maybe their phone’s working.”

“It won’t,” he said.

“How do you know that?”

“The phones are all on the same line. If one goes down, they all go down. Why not stay here for a while and try again later?”

There was something wrong with his face. Suddenly I realized he was trying to smile. The problem was it came across as super creepy. The other problem was I had no reason not to wait here. No reason I could put my finger on. No reason except the creeping suspicion in the back of my mind that something wasn’t right here. But how do I tell that to a farmer who’s half again my size and looks like he could bend me into a pretzel?

“Sure, I’ll stick around for a bit,” I said wearing my friendliest smile.

We went back into the kitchen. His wife seemed startled to see me return. She seemed even more startled to see her husband smiling.

I sat in a chair at the table.

‘Ok,’ I thought. ‘Just sit here and take a break. Don’t make eye contact, and whatever you do, don’t accept any… ‘

“Would you like a drink?” he said.

“Sure,” my mouth said making my mind say, ‘Doh!’

The woman brought over a glass of water, and I tried to just sip it, but it was nice and cold. I hadn’t drunk, anything in a while and didn’t realize how thirsty I was. I downed it in one go. At least I kept enough self-control that I didn’t give a big, ‘Ahh!’ at the end.

I sat the glass down on the table.

“Would you like another?” she said.

“No thank you. I was just thirsty from walking.”

“What do you deliver with your truck?” he said.

“Car parts,” I said. “I deliver to local repair shops.”

They both wore the polite, ‘Isn’t that interesting’ looks that told me it wasn’t interesting to them at all.

Darlene rose from her seat.

“I should be starting supper,” she said. “Would you like to stay and have supper with us?”

“Oh, no, I don’t want to trouble you,” I said.

“It’s no trouble,” the man said.

“I really should be going.”

“Where?” he said. “Why don’t you have supper with us, and you can try the phone again after?”

“That sounds great, but… “

“But we’re not good enough for you to spend time with?” he said.

“That’s not at all what I was going to say.”

I stood there, his glare burning through me.

“Of course, I’ll stay for supper.”

His hardened facial expression melted into a smile.

“Great,” he said. “I’ll go wash up in the upstairs bathroom and you can use the one down here.”

I smiled but my mind was screaming, ‘What did you get us into?’

I followed him out of the kitchen and went into the bathroom while he went upstairs. I could hear the steps creaking under his weight as he ascended. I stood there holding the bathroom door, looking at my escape, the front door a handful of steps away. But where would I go? Back out on the road where he could easily find me?

Maybe I could flag down a passing car before he knew I was gone. But then again, who knew when a car would go by? This wasn’t exactly the interstate.

In the end, I gave up and went into the bathroom to wash up. Not knowing exactly what that meant other than washing my hands, I decided to wash my face too, just in case.

As I dried my face, I saw the shadow in the window again. I tried to play it cool and put the towel back on the rack, then slid over toward the window and darted toward it. The shadow was too quick and disappeared before I could get a look.

I came back over to the mirror and stared into the tired eyes of a man in his late thirties who had traded his dreams for a secure job.

“You must be crazy,” my reflection said. “Why don’t you crawl out that window and get away from here?”

I turned and looked at the tantalizing window. When I turned back to the mirror, my reflection was still there.

“You want me to take the risk of escaping while you sit nice and comfy in your frame,” I said. “Why don’t you escape?”

My reflection glanced at the window but didn’t make a move toward it.

“That’s what I thought,” I said to the reflection.

I stepped out of the bathroom and was greeted by the most delicious smell. I glided into the kitchen and drank in the smell of glorious food.

“What’s that amazing smell?” I said.

Darlene jumped and turned around, brandishing a large spoon in self-defense.

“I’m sorry, I didn’t mean to scare you,” I said.

“It’s alright,” she said, her cheeks turning red. “I’m not used to anyone coming to the kitchen until I call for them.”

“Do you need any help?”

“Help?” she said looking at me like she didn’t understand the word.

“Yeah, help, like with setting the table,” I said.

“Oh, no, I always take care of that,” she said. “But thank you.”

I went to the table and sat down, watching her glide through the kitchen with practiced ease.

In no time, plates, glasses, and silverware appeared on the table. I noticed five place settings including the one where I sat. I was about to ask about the others when she yelled, “Supper!” It startled me when I realized it was the loudest I’d heard her say anything.

The man came through the door first, followed by a boy maybe eleven years old. Next came a young woman in her teenage years. I quickly glanced away.

The man’s eyes bored into mine and I suddenly found the pattern on the dishes to be the most interesting thing I’d ever seen.

Darlene brought over a large bowl and a plate full of biscuits. Three hands each grabbed a biscuit, the man took two, and began to disassemble them on their plates, then poured the gravy over the remnants of the biscuit.

“Well, what are you waiting for?” the man said to me. “Help yourself.”

I took a biscuit and separated it in half, then poured gravy over it that had chunks of meat in it.

“What kind of meat is this?” I said, inhaling the tantalizing aroma.

“Chicken,” Darlene said, darting her eyes toward the man.

“It smells amazing,” I said picking up my fork and diving into the gravy-soaked biscuit.

“Aren’t you forgetting something?” the man said.

I looked around and found all eyes on me as my fork froze halfway to my mouth. I paused and set it down, then folded my hands as the others had already done.

“Dear Lord,” the man said. “Thank you for the hands that prepared this meal and for blessing us with another day of life. Please help this fella to find his final destination and bless us to do your bidding, amen.”

I opened my eyes and everyone else was already devouring their meal. I picked up my fork, checking to be sure I wasn’t going to be admonished for eating this time, and began devouring as well.

To call the simple fare delicious would be an understatement. It was hands down the most incredibly tasty meal I’d ever eaten.

I shot Darlene my biggest smile.

“This is really delicious,” I said.

The man glared at me. The children shot curious looks at me. Darlene blushed and looked away.

“What?” I said.

“We’re not big on compliments around here,” the man said. “We do what needs to be done and don’t expect a fuss to be made about it.”

“Oh… umm… sorry?” I said, unsure if I was really being made to apologize for complimenting someone.

The man grunted and everyone went back to eating. I kept my eyes on my plate to avoid any further mistakes. When my plate was empty, I looked at the two remaining biscuits.

“You can have another if you want,” the man said.

“Only if no one else wants it,” I said.

The man looked around the table.

“It’s still on the plate, ain’t it?”

“Yes.”

“Then nobody else wants it.”

I tentatively reached for the delectable lump of dough, waiting to see if anyone would change their mind. When no one did I pulled it apart and doused it in the golden gravy. Within two minutes it was gone. I sat back, feeling satisfied as Darlene cleared the table and did the dishes. I considered offering to help, but after the compliment speech, I was pretty sure that wouldn’t go over very well.

“Do you mind if I try the phone again?” I said.

The man gave me a dismissive wave which I took for yes and I left the table only to be disappointed by the continued lack of a dial tone.

“Still no luck?” the man said.

“Nope.”

“Why don’t you stay here for the night?” he said.

“Oh no,” I said. “I couldn’t impose on you like that.”

“It’s not imposing,” he said. “We have a spare room.”

“I couldn’t, really.”

“Ok, how about this?” he said. “You stay the night. If the phone doesn’t work in the morning, I’ll drive you home.”

“You’d do that?”

He smiled. “Absolutely.”

“How can I refuse?” I said.

“Great, I’ll show you to your room.”

I followed him up the stairs to the end of a long hallway. There were three doors on the left-hand side and two doors on the right. We went to the last door on the left and into a beautiful bedroom.

“Wow, this is amazing,” I said.

He looked around.

“It’s just a room,” he said. “If you need to use the bathroom it’s across the hall.”

“Thank you very much,” I said holding out my hand.

He grabbed it and shook it with a wide smile.

“My pleasure.”

I waited until he left to collapse to the floor in agony at my hand that had been crushed by his handshake. The funny thing was I didn’t think he was trying to hurt me; it was just his natural strength. I made a mental note to never anger this man.

I set my lunchbox of belongings I’d brought from the truck on the bed and started going through them. I pulled out the small flashlight and set it on the nightstand. Next was the keychain size can of pepper spray. I looked at it for a moment then stuck it in my pants pocket. I stuck the multi-tool in my pocket as well, then set the rest, mainly consisting of snacks, in the drawer.

I wandered over to the window and looked out. It must’ve faced the back of the house because all I could see was a barn and a lot of field. The boy and the man were out there busying themselves with chopping firewood and throwing it on a pile. I didn’t think too much of it since it was July and winter would be here soon enough.

The sun was almost down and with it my last thoughts of going back to the truck or trying to walk to another house. I’d heard stories about things that roamed the countryside in the dark. I’d seen my share of them and knew they were nothing to be trifled with.

This place was nice and the people were friendly, in their own quirky way. I decided to go to the bathroom and get ready for bed. I opened my door and almost ran into the girl as she was reaching for the bathroom door.

“Sorry,” I said.

“Would you like to go first?” she said, looking down.

“No, you go ahead.”

She looked at me for a moment and grinned.

I backed into my room and closed the door.

I searched the room looking for anything to entertain me. There was no TV, no radio, nothing to distract me. In desperation, I opened a drawer and a Bible stared back at me.

I shrugged.

‘Maybe the good book will help me keep my mind off bad things.’

I flipped it open, stopped on a random page, and read,

James 1: 14, 15 –

14 but each person is tempted when they are dragged away by their own evil desire and enticed.

15 Then, after desire has conceived, it gives birth to sin; and sin, when it is full-grown, gives birth to death.

‘Great,’ I thought slamming the book closed and tossing it back in the drawer.

Just then there was a light tapping at the door. I went to it and opened it only to find the girl standing there just inches from me.

“I’m done if you’d like to use the bathroom now,” she said.

“Thank you,” I said.

I darted across the hall and shut the door. Five minutes later I opened the door to go back to my room but found the way blocked by the man.

He stared down at me.

“Enjoying yourself?” he said.

“I’m sorry?” I said starting to sweat.

“Is the room ok, are you enjoying yourself?”

“Oh, yes, very much, thank you.”

He smiled and nodded, then stepped into the bathroom and closed the door. I glanced down the hallway and there stood Darlene. She saw me and stopped, then went into her bedroom.

I turned and went into my room, closed the door, and tried to shake off this eerie feeling that no one wanted me here, but they were all pretending they did.

I laid down in the comfortable bed, leaving my clothes on. I’m not really sure why, I just didn’t feel right taking them off.

It didn’t take long for me to drift off to sleep, hoping the morning would come soon and I would be out of here.

***

I don’t know what woke me, but the room was dark when I opened my eyes. There was moonlight beaming in from the windows, bathing the room in a pale glow.

I sat up and looked outside to see a roaring fire in the backyard. I tried to get up and look but someone was standing in my way.

It was Darlene. She was standing beside the bed, staring at me.

“Is everything ok?” I said hesitantly.

She didn’t answer, just stared at me blankly as if she were sleepwalking.

I went to the other side of the bed, but someone was there too, it was the girl. She also was staring at me with a blank look. I tried to slide to the end of the bed, but the man and the boy were standing there staring as well. They were all dressed in black robes.

I backed up until my back was against the headboard.

“What is this?” I said, my eyes darting back and forth from one person to the next.

No one answered. It was eerily silent. I was hard-pressed to hear if they were even breathing, my heart was beating so loud. I had a sudden flashback to a zombie movie where this same thing happened right before they ate the person.

My mind was reeling. I was in full panic mode. I had no idea what they wanted, but I was sure it wasn’t good. I thought about making a break for it, but they had me surrounded. I started thinking in terms of the weakest link. The girl was standing beside the bed. Surely, I could push past her before one of the others could get ahold of me. It would’ve been a good plan if the door was on the wall beside the bed, but it wasn’t. It was on the wall at the foot of the bed. Which meant pushing past her, then trying to get past the man and the boy before reaching the door.

I was past regretting ever seeing this house. I was only concerned with getting out alive.

While I was thinking about escape, they made their move. They all grabbed me at the same time. It happened so fast I had no way of avoiding it. I tried to pull away, but their grip was like iron. It was even impossible to yank out of the girl’s grip.

They held me down and tied my hands with rope. Then they lifted me out of the bed and walked me down the stairs. We walked through the kitchen and out the back door where the blazing fire awaited, surrounded by a dozen people dressed in similar black robes.

We stepped inside the circle of people and stopped just before the fire. It was burning so hot I began to sweat.

The man stood behind me and held me in an iron grip.

Darlene stepped up to the fire then turned and addressed the group.

“Once again our lord had provided a sacrifice,” she said, making me go into sheer convulsions of panic.

The man gripped me tighter, nearly making me scream with pain.

He picked me up and laid me on a picnic table. All I could think of was a barbeque and I was the prize pig.

Darlene began murmuring in some language I didn’t know. It was repeated by the rest of the group. Even the young boy was murmuring and looking at me with malice in his eyes.

The sounds reached a fever pitch as they raised their hands and looked to the sky.

I tried to take advantage of the moment and roll off the table, but the man’s grip on my shoulders was like a vise.

They reached a crescendo and the sound died down as they lowered their hands and locked all eyes on me. I knew my time had come. Darlene turned toward me and pulled out a wicked-looking dagger that was covered in gemstones. She took a step toward me, then turned and handed it to her daughter.

She took it in two hands with reverence, then held it by the hilt and started toward me. The once angelic face had taken on a menacing grin. She approached the table receiving approving looks from all those around as they closed the circle in tight.

“Please don’t do this,” I said.

She flashed a wicked grin and raised the knife over me, holding her breath for a moment before she plunged it toward my chest.

I was out of options. I did the one thing I swore I’d never do again.

My hands darted up with inhuman speed and caught hers, holding the knife at bay. She struggled, putting all her weight into the downward thrust, but my hands had already grown larger and hairier.

Her eyes grew wide as she drank in my transformation, watching as my arms, legs, and chest grew insanely strong muscles and became covered in fur.

Her shock was magnified when I flexed my arms and shattered her wrists, bending them backward and plunging the knife into her chest. Her mouth fell open to scream and I filled it with my claws, ripping straight through the back of her head. I grabbed her throat and ripped it out.

She fell, blood pouring from her neck, her eyes frozen in a state of shock.

The man tried to wrestle me back down, but I towered over him, grabbing him by the torso and throwing him down on the table, shattering it and his back. I grabbed his arms and legs and twisted them together hearing the bones snap as I made him into a human pretzel.

Darlene was next. She, like the others, had come to the realization that their little ceremony had gone wrong. I leaped in front of her, grabbed her arms, and ripped them out of their sockets. I then stabbed her in the heart with the sharp broken bones.

Next, I grabbed the boy, opened my mouth, shoved his head inside, and crushed it with the snap of my jaws.

I used my animal instincts to track down each of the escaping cultists and eviscerated them one by one.

When the last one was dead, I slowly walked back to the house. My adrenaline bled off as the danger level dropped. I slowly transformed back into my human form and stood by the fire looking from body to body as puddles of blood formed around them.

As I walked past the man, he yelled, “You’ve taken everything from me!”

I stopped and slowly turned, looking at his broken limbs twisted at unnatural angles.

I stepped over and stood beside him.

“You were perfectly willing to take everything from me,” I said. “How many others have there been just like me? How many innocent souls cry out from the unmarked graves you buried them in somewhere in the wilderness after you inflicted unthinkable torture on them? You say I’ve taken everything from you and yet you still draw breath. What happens when one predator meets another?”

He tried to look away, but couldn’t move his head.

“One of two things,” I continued. “Either they stare each other down and go their separate ways, or they fight to the death. You had a chance to let me go my way. You thought I was weak, and in the end, I showed you your folly.”

I stepped over and ripped the sacrificial knife from the dead girl’s chest, stepped back over to him, placed it to his throat, and slashed across watching the spray of blood drain what was left of his useless life.

“Now I’ve taken everything from you,” I said, dropping the knife as the light faded from his eyes.

I went to the fire and picked up a piece of burning wood then threw it through the kitchen window.

I walked down the driveway and onto the road. The moonlight lit my way as the sound of crackling wood grew less the further I walked down the road toward the place I called home.

You may wonder why I wrote this. You might say I was telling on myself, and the police might have a few questions for me.

That’s the benefit of people who don’t want to believe those who say they’ve seen extraordinary things. The truth remains shrouded behind the mask of doubt and unbelievability.

The real reason I wrote this is as a warning. Never take strangers for granted. You never know who or what they are.

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notyourcure t1_iyx8bgn wrote

"Next came a shapely young woman who seemed to be in her teenage years and in the throes of puberty. I quickly glanced away from the fact that she was developing all the right curves in all the right places and her face looked like it belonged on the cover of a magazine."

"She nodded and walked down the hall. It took every ounce of willpower not to watch her walk away in her nightdress."

Creeping on someone who hasn't even finished puberty? You had it coming, dude.

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jemija t1_iyxwqr4 wrote

Yeah. The emphasis in the fact that she was a teenager entering puberty is weird. OP is a bit of a villain to me.

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Redditributor t1_iyyd237 wrote

He is clearly a villain. He murdered all those people cruelly after they fed him and assisted him without any real evidence they were hurting innocent people.

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realchessman t1_iyzza38 wrote

i mean, they did come to his room wearing cultist robes and trying to sacrifice him with a knife. I feel as if that was evidence enough.

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Redditributor t1_iz0j6rw wrote

So now they can't freely traverse their home in clothing they like or even carry knives?!

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Evening_Storage_6424 t1_iz8k6ym wrote

I took it to mean like 18-19 but even so if he’s in his late 30s ew

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discaxia t1_izn2ka5 wrote

18 and 19 years old are not “in the throes of puberty”.

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Griffith63 t1_iyyrs4s wrote

While I think it is also weird. I think OP was showing an animalistic view of the girl, which I think was a bit of foreshadowing to his animalistic side. Just my take.

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Ok_Science_4094 t1_iyyz3cv wrote

That's a good point. I also found it weird, I wouldn't have thought about that if you didn't point it out.

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ElysianWinds t1_iyxfyrn wrote

"Next came a shapely young woman who seemed to be in her teenage years and in the throes of puberty. I quickly glanced away from the fact that she was developing all the right curves in all the right places and her face looked like it belonged on the cover of a magazine."

"She nodded and walked down the hall. It took every ounce of willpower not to watch her walk away in her nightdress."

Seconding the other person, coming off as really creepy. You lost me there

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CzernaZlata t1_iyupgeg wrote

I'm amazed they were still trying to escape after what you put them through. Happy trails

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Shadowwolfmoon13 t1_iyz1602 wrote

I feel they got what they deserved. They set him up to kill him from minute one. They attacked him! Was he supposed to let them slice and dice him? That meat n the gravy could be a previous person they sacrificed! As for the girl, maybe she was luring him. I vote thumbs up Werewolf!

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BonksMan t1_iz6n5fr wrote

FBI : reading "the right curves" and "in her teens" and readying the silver bullets

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VladSuarezShark t1_iyux5l3 wrote

Did you know you were a werewolf before that night?

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Anthiss t1_iyw74pq wrote

He said he did the one thing he swore never to do again. I'd assume he knew but doesn't like his animalistic side. So he tries not to transform unless in mortal danger.

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catriana816 t1_iywasds wrote

"... the one thing I swore I'd never do again." So, yeah.

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FruitcakeAndCrumb t1_iyxrtpn wrote

May I ask what type of creature you are and if you've ever thought of going after people like the sack of chanting dipshits you slaughtered?

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MrCleanEyeballs t1_iyys8bv wrote

Had my heart pounding with all the action there, it was like I saw through your eyes. Hope you got your truck fixed, or did you decide to do a different job?

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Guns57 t1_iyxj4to wrote

What an L. Alex?

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Responsible-Cold8257 t1_j1xworm wrote

what a twist!! you certainly have seen your fair share of what roams in the dark…

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