Submitted by Jgrupe t3_xuiifx in nosleep

The new girl in class smiled at me as she sat down at the desk across the aisle. Her grin was a little crooked, revealing dark, red-stained teeth, as if she’d just been drinking fruit punch.

I'll admit, she seemed a bit weird right from the start. She wandered in halfway through the semester, causing the teachers in my high school a lot of grief. During every lesson she was confused, as if whatever school she had been to previously was not up to snuff.

Regardless of that, Hilda attended class every day and sat right beside me. We shared glances back and forth across the aisle and I got the impression she liked me.

Then one day she passed me a note asking what I thought of her. Being a sixteen year old boy with few romantic prospects, I passed it back with a picture of a cartoon wolf howling at the moon and she burst out laughing.

After that we were inseparable. She started coming over to my house after school and I introduced her to my parents. We went to the movies together and watched TV in my basement. We made out on the couch down in the darkness of my den, listening carefully for my mom’s creeping footsteps coming down the stairs.

We dated for a few weeks before I began getting a little freaked out by some of her quirks. She hid it pretty well at first, but after a while things started to add up. It wasn’t any one big problem, just lots of little things.

She collected my hair. That was weird. She gathered up bunches of it from my brush and I caught her stuffing it into her pockets one day. When I confronted her about it she just denied it.

The other strange thing was that I was never allowed to go over to her house. She said her parents were very religious and would never let her have a guy over. But when I dropped her off at night I would see strange flashes of red and green light glowing through the windows from inside. And once I could have sworn I saw someone levitating - hovering several feet off the floor and screaming at the top of their lungs, looking terrified. But when I looked back the person was gone, as if I had just imagined it.

Oh, and she wore strange jewelry as well - upside-down crosses and pentagrams. Weird, druidic symbols made into necklaces and rings. I asked her if she was into Wicca, but she just looked confused and told me she prefered comfortable furniture.

It wasn’t just those things that made me break up with her. My friend Greg told me this other girl Sarah had a thing for me, and I always thought she was smoking hot.

In retrospect I should have been nicer about it. I should have called Hilda at least, to break up with her.

But instead I just sent her a text, saying it was over.

She called me two seconds later, bursting into tears when I confirmed it was real. She asked what she had done wrong, and I told her it wasn’t her, it was me. But she didn’t sound any happier about things, and just kept asking why I was really breaking up with her.

I started to get impatient and we ended up bickering back and forth for a while. After thirty minutes of arguing, I told her what I really thought of her and the actual reasons why I was breaking up with her.

Big mistake.

The crying stopped suddenly and I heard the sound of a dial tone.

After we hung up, I felt a stabbing pain in my belly, as if someone were driving a knife into my abdomen. It got worse and worse until I doubled over, and I was soon laying on the floor of my living room, howling in agony.

It let up after a few long minutes and I groaned with relief, getting up from the floor on wobbly legs.

I got a text from Hilda a moment later.

The message included a picture displaying a strange-looking homemade doll with wispy strands of human hair protruding from its head. The face on it looked like my face. And there was a needle being driven into the doll’s belly, deforming the soft fabric with its sharp point.

Another text came through from Hilda.

Sore tummy? She asked mockingly.

I began to type in a message with shaking hands, begging for her forgiveness and telling her I didn’t mean what I said. I just needed some time alone.

Bullshit, she responded. I know you’re leaving me for Sarah.

Before I could type anything back, I felt a searing pain in my belly again, but this time much worse than before. I looked down to see blood pouring out and dripping to the floor, forming a puddle around my feet.

Another text came through and this one was a picture again. It was her cutting the doll’s plump belly open with a serrated knife, peeling back the fabric to reach inside.

The phone dinged again with another message and another picture. I had imagined there being white fuzz inside the strange figurine, like any other stuffed doll would have inside, but instead there was blood with bits that looked like tiny organs floating in it.

I felt as if a hand were reaching inside of me, pulling on things and twisting my guts, cutting and hacking with a knife.

Surely enough, the next picture she sent showed her clutching a chicken liver or a kidney in her hand, and another showed her squeezing it into a juicy, chunky pulp.

On my left side it felt as if something had burst and I screamed as the warmth of blood filled my insides. My guts felt like they were being twisted and pulled for a few long moments, but then that sensation stopped and I was left gasping for breath again, down on my knees although I didn’t remember how I got there.

I sent Hilda a text with my trembling hands, missing the buttons and taking five minutes to get it done. But finally I managed to finish the message and sent it.

Please, take me back. I’m sorry.

It was all that I could think to do. It was the only way to get her to stop hurting me.

I’m coming over, she replied a moment later. I’ll see you soon.

With a pit of dread forming in my stomach, I sent her a response, saying that I couldn’t wait to see her.

I just hoped she could fix whatever she had done to me, using the magic of her strange little doll.

When she arrived at my door, a wave of relief washed over me, seeing that she had brought the doll with her.

Maybe she did intend to fix me, I thought, and a hopeful grin spread at the corners of my mouth.

“Thanks for coming over,” I said. “So? Will you take me back? Can you fix me?”

Hilda seemed to consider this for a moment, then shook her head.

“No,” she said. “Nobody can fix you. I just wanted to watch this part for myself.”

With that, she produced a small pocket knife and began to cut long gashes going vertically down the doll’s face, running across the eyes and popping the tiny sewn buttons which were attached there. She dug the blade and twisted it, sending pieces of the doll flying through the air.

“Not so handsome anymore,” she said, as blood began to pour from my cheeks and my eyeballs burst open, spilling intraocular fluids which ran warmly down my chin. “I don’t think Sarah is gonna be interested in you after all.”

She left me blinded on the floor, terrified out of my mind and bleeding profusely.

It took a while to recover in hospital but I'm doing a little better now.

Thank goodness for the speech to text software that allowed me to post this to share with you all. And the help of friends and family.

Witches, what can you do?

MAD

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HorrorJunkie123 t1_iqvpbc7 wrote

I didn't know those creepy little dolls had actual organs in them. GROSS

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SimbaTheSavage8 t1_iqvpuva wrote

It’s your fault you know. You should’ve broken the news to Hilda GENTLY. She knew this all along. That’s why she collected your hair.

And by the way, I sold her the doll. Would you like one too?

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Jgrupe OP t1_iqvqreo wrote

I didn't realize this was gonna get so messy... Breakups are the worst. And yes, a doll that looks like her would be wonderful - maybe I can get my revenge somehow. I just need to collect some of her hair...

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CBenson1273 t1_iqvsyg8 wrote

Dude, you made some bad choices here. You hooked up with a witch, and you dumped her cruelly. You should have known that wouldn’t go well. I hope you see the error of your ways (not that you’ll be seeing anything again). Seems like this mistake has caught up with you permanently. If she leaves you alive, hopefully you’ll learn from this. Be kind. You never know when it will save you.

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morteamoureuse t1_iqvx1tf wrote

To be honest, I doubt you were that handsome to begin with if you were desperate enough to hook up with the weird girl with stained teeth. Consider plastic surgery and narrowing down your dating pool (should be easier now!).

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KYpineapple t1_iqwat54 wrote

oof. at least you have proof to sue??

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JustMeAmity t1_iqwf099 wrote

How are you even alive right now

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Secariel t1_iqwfhbg wrote

Hell hath no fury…

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Orange__Moon t1_iqwq7s9 wrote

My daughter wears pentagrams and upside down crosses to school too. Ain't nothing weird about that. She's just goth, atheist and is an artist, a really good one. Drop dead gorgeous too. She has a boyfriend though. Just wanted to point out most pentagram wearers don't collect hair and spew red and green light while floating and screaming in their house at night. Those were red flags. Which young people need to pay closer attention to.

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Orange__Moon t1_iqwr2rn wrote

Not really. Some can be. I could be, like if my children are harmed, I would be brutal. But getting bent out of shape over a relationship that you not only aren't married but don't even live together is not only silly, it's stupid and a waste of time, regardless of what they did or who they cheated with. Best to ignore them and move on with something better. Learning experiences is what those are called. Everyone needs them.

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FluidEntrepreneur309 t1_iqwuimn wrote

Damn i always knew teens are weird this days. Nobody can stop them tbh CUTTING A DOLL WITH ORGANS

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TrickKlepto t1_iqx0uk4 wrote

If she was going to meet up with me I would fucking ambush her, I’ll stab her to death and then probably bleed out

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eucbdh t1_iqx9u5i wrote

tbh i dont think she liked it when you broke up with her

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jayrock306 t1_iqxizm4 wrote

Honestly that seems a little too rough. Yes he broke your heart and yes he was rude but come on he's just a dumb teenager. Chances are things won't even work out with Sarah.

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Paradoxinthewind t1_iqxlbog wrote

The line about Wicca being uncomfortable furniture cracked me up.

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Jazenide t1_iqxlbq3 wrote

Organ munchers. Yummy

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Ok-Gur-6602 t1_iqxpy96 wrote

What's wrong with you kid? You should've been delighted that she was collecting your hair, everything that you saw as a red flag, no, no, that was a green light. You could be happily summoning demons right now as you learn the ways of the occult.

Sarah's a complete floozy, Hilda knew what was best for you from square one.

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JMei- t1_iqyez2m wrote

damn does hilda like girls

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ArgiopeAurantia t1_iqyg9n2 wrote

Yeah, he's a dumb teenager, but so is she. And heartbreak is a hell of a drug, especially before you get used to it.

And then suddenly you're 35 and pretty much entirely composed of baggage.

I think Hilda might have had the right idea here.

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Sir_Breck t1_iqyi2f3 wrote

Upside-down pentagram with a goat's head drawn inside=100% Satanic.

Your standard upside-down pentagram isn't necessarily Satanic or evil. Symbols have multiple meanings and usually require context clues to properly decipher the "true" or intended meaning.

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GuiltyPleasures117 t1_iqymd04 wrote

Just read the 1st paragraph, her family could be beet farmers & her teeth stained with beet juice, lol. Had to comment, sorry. Going to continue with story now

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Reddd216 t1_iqyr3b6 wrote

Dude, you NEVER break up via text!!

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ViperColt t1_iqyursa wrote

Hilda sounds like some witch from Hansen and Gretel.

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Shadowwolfmoon13 t1_iqz0jls wrote

It would help to SEE what your doing! Leaves you out now. I love how she came in person to see the finally! Better than Memorex! Lol by the way - ever go out with Sara?

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StrikingAd9256 t1_iqz575m wrote

It’s the fact that this wouldn’t have (probably) happened if Sarah didn’t like you

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Japjer t1_iqz71du wrote

How did you survive all of that and manage to type this up?

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mertmoore t1_iqzb8q0 wrote

She is definitely gonna be the girl of your dreams.

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ShoddyOven2819 t1_iqzid1x wrote

I had no idea that those eerie tiny dolls contained real organs.

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