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SaintCholo t1_j3o96wv wrote

Very good, but more emphasis on the torpedos, they shud pop (no pun intended)

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milny_gunn OP t1_j3oi7gf wrote

You have to think about scale. Cuz I did have bigger more detailed Torpedoes but they can't be the same size as the boat. I should edit in all the previous versions I think there's three before this one and there's a whole different one totally different ship that I drew on a completely different app. I did it on SketchBook.

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SaintCholo t1_j3oii9v wrote

The fact that you did it is bad ass… the torpedos are not vivid enough more umph, still great but for publication make them easier to see…somehow

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milny_gunn OP t1_j3ol6fo wrote

Yeah the perspective doesn't give me much to work with. The first one I drew was not through a periscope it was more of a bird's eye view and you can see the torpedo path much better but it was a crappy drawing and real jumpy. I'll try to edit it and if I can find it again.

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