lollersauce914 t1_j8tkxyt wrote on February 16, 2023 at 9:20 PM

This seems very unnecessarily busy. There's absolutely no reason for the ranking to be a giant doughnut graphic scaled to the size of the thing that's already shown by the choropleth map underneath.

The rankings, which probably aren't needed at all, could just be added in the label for the state (e.g., 22.862 (1) for PA) or just put in a separate table.

tilapios t1_j8tng0e wrote on February 16, 2023 at 9:35 PM

Something that's dawning upon me is that I think a lot of people believe a busy graph means the results are more profound.

lollersauce914 t1_j8tpzik wrote on February 16, 2023 at 9:51 PM

as in writing: brevity is the soul of wit.

leech932 t1_j8ujhcw wrote on February 17, 2023 at 1:13 AM

There's also no need to list both a weekly and daily average - those both convey the same information, one is just 7x the other. The daily average probably provides a better picture - I don't think anyone thinks about snacks eaten per week.

AbsoluteCondui t1_j8uv0sn wrote on February 17, 2023 at 2:41 AM

I appreciate you!

KoeiNL t1_j8vtikx wrote on February 17, 2023 at 8:38 AM

Making a visualisation is the art of removing things.