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JonathanCue OP t1_j6entk3 wrote

Reply to comment by MaoFeipang in What is a plot/world-building issue that breaks your suspension of disbelief? by JonathanCue

Oooh, any specific examples?

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MaoFeipang t1_j6exyml wrote

No works off the top of my head, sorry. I had this whole long response with an example of a classmates writing assignment they got a good grade on, but it's all so stupid. Nobody who gets published writes like that, so it probably doesn't matter

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