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GuyMcGarnicle t1_j62jnlg wrote

Lol, I personally thought the ending was extremely implausible and conjured up just for “shock value” … suspension of disbelief be damned. My issues with it are (SPOILERS follow):

— no mother who isn’t a psychopath would write about how she killed her daughter as a “literary exercise” … not three days after daughter accidentally drowns, not ever. Not buying it at all.

— no one prints things out anymore, let alone print something out with false confessions of murder and leave it just floating around the house

— no grieving mother could keep up that charade of being brain-dead for as long as Verity did. It’s impossible.

— only a psychopath mom would inflict upon her grieving son the “brain dead” charade, making Verity a villain regardless of whether the autobiography was true

— if Verity’s deception of being brain dead was so critical, why did she risk it by appearing on the stairs while her husband banged Lowen, by walking around at night, by waving at her son … it makes no sense as any of those moves would have most likely blown her cover

— how did Verity set up a secret new bank account and then get her publisher the wiring instructions if she was supposedly comatose?

— a woman of Verity’s wealth would not need to “wait until the wire hits the bank” in order to flee town with her son.

— from a “literary” perspective, the way Verity delivered all that exposition in her letter, much of it already known to her husband the intended recipient, was just awful writing, not to mention how convenient it was that the letter was found at the perfect time for the conclusion

— I can’t even remember how she supposedly rigged the car wreck

BUT, with all that said, I did kinda really enjoy the ride until the last 10 pages.

Also, did you notice the 8th book in the series was to be called Truth? My theory is the book “Verity” is actually Book 8 in the series as Verity = Truth.

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iamwhoiwasnow OP t1_j62k7g3 wrote

All valid points. If you start dissecting the book you see a lot of inconsistencies but I'm trying to enjoy books more and dissect them less. I think the there's too many conflicting things that happen that if I overthink it I'd come to the conclusion that Verity is a murdering psycho but so is Jeremy.

This part I wheheartedly agree with you. I despised the exposition and I guess it would also help cement the fact that the letter isn't the truth because she's giving exposition to whoever finds it but I genuinely just think Colleen couldn't think of a clever was to address it.

>— from a “literary” perspective, they way Verity delivered all that exposition in her letter, much of it already known to her husband the intended recipient, was just awful writing, not to mention how convenient it was that the letter was found at the perfect time for the conclusion

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GuyMcGarnicle t1_j63qjr4 wrote

I totally agree with this, especially when it comes to thrillers. Personally I think Verity’s letter was a self-serving lie. But it still requires she faked her injury which on its face I find totally unbelievable. If Hoover had taken maybe 100 more pages, she could have made it believable by having the nurse involved in the deception, or possibly Jeremy, or incorporated a supernatural element like a horror novel. By the time the end hit, I had already forgiven several other issues cuz I was enjoying the book, such as … in NYC, seeing a pedestrian hit is actually rare; I don’t believe a child with a peanut allergy and an epi-pen at a slumber party with adults/parents present would just die as depicted; and “Asperger’s” is no longer an actual medical diagnosis, which a parent of a child who has been diagnosed with Autism Spectrum Disorder would know. All those things are forgivable … but then the end was just too over the top and it totally took me out of the story.

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