Little details that break immersion: worth it to continue the book? (Sun Down Motel) Submitted by MllePerso t3_z871d9 on November 29, 2022 at 9:38 PM in books 14 comments 0
riordan2013 t1_iyb2jvh wrote on November 30, 2022 at 1:55 AM This would not constitute a small town like the one where I grew up, but it resembles small towns I've been to in other parts of the country. The thing that breaks my immersion most is when authors use "okay" in, like, Tudor England. NO. Permalink 3
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