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PJsinBed149 t1_ixhnqhd wrote

Reply to comment by anonamen in When is the authors POV too much? by Extension_Virus_835

>she sometimes forgets that her characters are characters and starts writing monologues in her own voice

This is key for me. If there's a character whose only role is to declare the view of the author, I find it really boring and annoying. I DNF'ed The Island by Aldous Huxley because of this.

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