meeeooow1 t1_jdx9eim wrote
Reply to comment by Majestic-Rutabaga-28 in What are your thoughts on jargon in books? by [deleted]
I agree. People know too little of swords. My problem is easier to solve when you're writing in a third person like you point out.
Majestic-Rutabaga-28 t1_jdxa9vz wrote
If the character is a teacher it makes sense the way you wrote it, if not ot just feels like unrealistic conversation
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