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Majestic-Rutabaga-28 t1_jdx8fwu wrote

The character wouldnt say it. It knows the sword. But the narrator should use jargon. People need to be educated about new words

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meeeooow1 t1_jdx9eim wrote

I agree. People know too little of swords. My problem is easier to solve when you're writing in a third person like you point out.

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Majestic-Rutabaga-28 t1_jdxa9vz wrote

If the character is a teacher it makes sense the way you wrote it, if not ot just feels like unrealistic conversation

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