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GonnaLearnThis2day t1_j9it61s wrote

Reply to comment by JaythonBlake in What does this mean? I understand it but don't understand it. The examples are a bit confusing. I am not sure how the pattern works. Maybe some more examples would help? by [deleted]

I'm sorry, but that isn't correct. There is no conflict between 'being hydrated' and a 'need for water', while there is a conflict between 'control' and 'trust'. And that's what you want in a story: inner conflict that the character will work on and grow.

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