intheweebcloset t1_j56fow3 wrote
Reply to comment by intheweebcloset in [WP] Write a story about a doctor trying to save a patient in critical condition, but it's in a fantasy world, and all the scientific stuff is replaced with magic and artefacts. by SciencesnObjects40
The husband spoke, calmed by her presence. "Did you figure out what went wrong last time?"
"No." Electra said as she turned to Simon. "But you will. Place your hands on top of mine."
Simon did as told, her tone didn't leave much space for outside opinion.
"As a doctor, you know the human body better than me. I'll supply the magic, you provide the knowledge."
She carried his hands over the woman's body, and Simon felt the patients pain as if it were his. Organ failures, blood clots, several easy to miss issues compiled into a giant problem.
As he pointed issued out, Electra surged power into the spot. They operated that way for two hours before the woman was saved. She slept peacefully on the mattress afterward, with her husband sobbing into her hair. He tried mumble thanks, but his sobs disrupted every attempt.
Simon walked the other four men out of the room. The couple deserve some privacy. Electra walked alongside him, stray sparks of electricity hissing with each step.
She told him, " It'd be a shame for your talents to go to waste here. Medical knowledge is invaluable."
Simon forced a smile and said, "What makes you think I'm wasting them. I'm doing just fine."
"Uh huh," she said, swiping a finger at a passing table and showing him the dust she'd collected. "I'm a bit of a straight shooter, so you'll have to excuse me. You should work under me. That was scary, and could have been prevented if we'd detected the signs earlier." She raised a hand for him to shake.
Simon stared, considered, then shook it. "Do you think I could save people? I wouldn't be an accessory, I could actually help others?"
"Did you forget the past two hours already? Short term memory loss isn't good for a doctor."
Simon felt he could cry. He journeyed with Electra from that day on, performing preventive screening of citizens, saving lives. Though not the way he learned in school, he'd evolved, and found his purpose again. When they saw him, they labeled him one of Electra's kind.
They called him a hero, but he was still a doctor.
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