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tarok26 t1_j56u5gl wrote

Reply to comment by Murlock_Holmes in [WP] You are secretly a powerful villain who mainly uses their powers to play pranks on heroes, your son who's only been a villain for a year has just been killed by a team of teen heroes, Everyone isn't too concerned about what you'll do except for your nemesis who fully knows what your capable of by britishgamer215

m8! It was intense and well structured at the same time. Like a first page of the book. Keep it up!

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