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SpikedZen t1_j68odcx wrote

Reply to comment by m-s-c-s in [WP] The dragon spoke, "Release my human, and we will leave you all in peace. Do not, and I will reduce your walls to rubble to rescue them myself." by quazerflame

This was a great interaction. Very well written :D

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m-s-c-s t1_j68qyqq wrote

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it! I had like 3 or 4 different ones flash through my head that were all TREMBLE BEFORE ME type stories, but the prompt had such a fun opportunity there - there was no threat of death, only destruction. Once I noticed it I knew I had to use it :)

I'd probably change a few things here and there (I used lips for the smile twice too close together, a few word tweaks and stuff.) I kinda wanna see where else the story takes me. I don't write much, so the answer is probably "a sad untouched .pages file sitting in iCloud" but we'll see!

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quazerflame OP t1_j68xwkb wrote

I'm glad you caught the lack of death threats! I'd love to see a continuation, Glassmaker rescuing Sir Alden Darwin, and perhaps that tea as well!

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m-s-c-s t1_j6amof3 wrote

Thank you so much for the inspiration! This is a blast! I'm still posting as more of the story bubbles up :)

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