Submitted by Maven_Writes t3_109znai in WritingPrompts
SirPiecemaker t1_j41j3g0 wrote
"That'll be 9 dollars, sir," I said as I handed the man before me the pizza.
"Oh, uh," he said, tapping his pockets, "just put it on the table here. Forgot my wallet in the living room."
I smiled politely and stepped into the cramped foyer. Putting the pizza on the nearby table, I looked around casually. Nothing of interest, really. Coats, muddy shoes, things I've seen hundreds of times during my time as a pizza delivery boy. With my hands in my pockets, I slowly took a few steps towards the living room to meet the man halfway-
-and tripped. A rug on the floor the corner of which was flipped, creating enough of an obstacle.
It was as if time slowed around me until I finally managed to find stable footing at the last possible moment. Then, a sickening feeling came over me like someone threw my head into a dryer and set it to max. I grabbed my brow with a pained expression just as the man turned the corner, cash in hand.
"Whoa, you alright?" he said as he saw my state.
"Ye- yeah, just... sudden vertigo," I said and looked at him. My eyes went wide - something about him was unsettling. I looked down; the carpet was gone. It was never there. "It happens sometimes," I added nervously.
"Well, here, there's 10, keep the change."
"Than- thanks," I said and hurriedly left the apartment. Walking as fast as I could, I took deep breaths and tried to piece together what just happened.
Apart from the fact that I died.
Funny thing about this city; you don't die from accidents. Or, rather, you do but just before you bite it, your consciousness gets transferred into an alternate world where the circumstances were just different enough for you to survive, like a car going one mile slower making a hit into a narrow miss. No idea why it's only us from this city - an experiment gone wrong. More wrong for me. See, when you transport, you don't know you died. You think you had a close call. But I remember. My deaths, the details, all of it. Just takes a second for me to piece it all together.
And, for the first time, I realize that the definition of "dying from an accident" may be broader than I realized. Explains why the man unsettled me.
When I tripped, I didn't die from the fall.
I died because I fell head-first into the living room and saw the bodies.
wonderinglife2 t1_j427jdc wrote
Very unexpected turn at the end I like
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