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RolledANat1 OP t1_j6kmz6a wrote

First off, love the classic "Bully makes me rage enough to jumpstart my powers" used here. Second, love that the power is reminiscent of Zelda: A Link Between Worlds, that being your main character turns into a drawing. This was really well written; Wish the pacing was slowed down a tad to build more of what led up to the fight, but overall very well done!

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