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yoderftw t1_j5b95ww wrote

Reply to comment by Writteninsanity in [WP] The queen is dead. The kingdom burns around you. Her soldiers fight on, but the invader is relentless. You do the only thing you can; you flee to beg mercy from your god, to call on your protector to cast out your enemies. You leave the hive in search of its beekeeper. by ArseneArsenic

This is incredibly well done. Instantly pulled me in and someone started cutting onions by the time I reached the end. Bravo!

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