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donutguy640 t1_j4qk4ez wrote

Reply to comment by telpereon in [WP] In this world healers, while respected, are often looked down upon due to their limited offensive capabilities. One day your party is completely wiped out, and the world finds out just how dangerous knowledge of human anatomy can be. by Useless_homosapien

"from a warrior two" confused me till I got 3 lines down.

I'd suggest changing to "from a warrior two...what should I call them? Kills?"

Quite liked the story though, especially the sociopathic insanity vibe I get!

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telpereon t1_j50j8pr wrote

:) that was the idea so very cool that came through. I will edit and see what I can do about that...I was trying to give it that normal conversational feel but missed as it was not broken up right :)

Thanks for the feedback too :)

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