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WayyTooAce t1_j4xkvtb wrote

Reply to comment by Murlock_Holmes in [WP] You, the God of War, are on a rampage across a battlefield. As you face down a terrified army, a small chihuahua charges out from them, and does its' best attempt at a howl at you. by JacobJamesTrowbridge

Small thing , very small but at the start so I had i hard time ignoring it. I think was and what is switched in the first sentence.
Very good no matter what

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Murlock_Holmes t1_j4xmg77 wrote

I don’t know what I was thinking with that sentence. I fixed it.

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