Murlock_Holmes t1_j4xigdf wrote
What was left of my armor was stained in blood. Most of it had been chipped away by the spears and arrows. Not like I needed it. My body was impervious to any damage from mortal weapons. It was a waste of armor, honestly. But my family insisted I show some modesty. I didn't show any mercy, so modesty would have to do.
I swept my hand out and cut down seventeen men with a blade of fire that shot out of my arm. I swept my hand the other way, and a wave of water appeared and smashed into a small platoon. This was too easy. I almost felt bad. Almost.
I dove into the group nearest to me and willed two blades to my hands, and began spinning like a tornado. I sliced all of their throats, and blood began raining from the corpses. It was glorious. As I finished the group, I stepped out. The next closest group was about fifty yards from me. Far enough that I couldn't kill them from here without magic, and that was no fun. I stepped toward them.
As I did, a small furry creature arose from the ranks. It couldn't be bigger than my foot. Was it a rat? No. Its ears were pointed up. Almost as large as its head. Bigger, even. It had buggy eyes and looked like a demonic rodent. It threw its head back and let loose what I assume was a howl. At least, that's what it was trying to do.
Its stance was much like that of a wolf. Feet in front of its shoulders, bowed down, with its face looking to the sky as it released a high-pitched noise. What in the fuck was this thing?
I stepped forward some more, and, what I assumed to be, the dog continued attempting to howl at me. It was so tiny. I had never seen a dog so small. All dogs from home were mighty beasts that howled with the ferocity of a wolf but had the personality of a domesticated beast. This thing was just pathetic. But something about it was... cute.
I made it to the creature, and it continued barking. I squatted down to get a closer look. It was mostly light brown with a white chest. It had a black snout. Why had they sent this creature out here? I looked up to see if they were advancing while I examined the animal, but they were all still.
I liked this creature. It feared nothing. It showed courage worthy of a creature of the gods. I was going to keep it. I summoned a dark blade to my hand and sliced the air behind me. The space ripped and opened a hole to my home in the heavens. I grabbed the small dog and placed it inside the hole. I closed the hole up and stood back to my full height.
"Whose creature was this?" I yelled at the men as they cowered behind their shields.
"Mine, m'lord," one man said from the third row.
"Come forth," I bellowed. He made his way out of the group and stood in front of them all. "Closer, mortal." He came to stand right in front of me. I raised a hand, and lightning struck behind him, killing all of the men he previously stood with. The battlefield was empty except for him and me.
"I have spared your life on this day in exchange for your furry warrior. Spread word of this kindness I have done. I have done what I have never done in history. I have shown mercy. Go forth and spread the news."
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Let me know what you think! I'm still working on my writing. Any feedback or criticism is welcome.
JacobJamesTrowbridge OP t1_j4xiz6e wrote
Love it! In case you were wondering, this video was the inspiration for the post
CheekyMarmoset t1_j50h7cw wrote
Omg that exact video was what I thought of when I saw the prompt! I LOVE LOVE LOVE this prompt.
Murlock_Holmes t1_j52bsql wrote
Lmfao I just watched that. holy shit.
WayyTooAce t1_j4xkvtb wrote
Small thing , very small but at the start so I had i hard time ignoring it. I think was and what is switched in the first sentence.
Very good no matter what
Murlock_Holmes t1_j4xmg77 wrote
I don’t know what I was thinking with that sentence. I fixed it.
Front_World205 t1_j4zj9c9 wrote
nah bc i would be throwing hands for my dog 🫡 i would of died lMAO
MrRedoot55 t1_j4yijno wrote
Good job.
Purple_Cheetah1619 t1_j51wurq wrote
Love it! You definitely caught the personality of most chihuahuas I've met.
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