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aDittyaDay t1_j6o2j8r wrote

Reply to comment by GodKingChrist in [WP] You work for an organisation that works to prevent atrocities with the use of the butterfly effect, receiving bizarre orders from an ultra-intelligent AI that tells you weeks later what disasters your actions prevented and how. Recently, you start to suspect that the AI has ulterior motives. by Thisnameistrashy

I like your descriptive voice! You have a very gripping writing style!

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GodKingChrist t1_j6o7bl7 wrote

I'm a ĺot better at describing things than I am at getting characters to speak in a charismatic way. I've also noticed I sorta bounce between scenes with little in the way of transition

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