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[deleted] t1_j6pddcc wrote

I truly enjoyed this! Your writing is very well done--bravo!--and it's what you did with it that is unique: the reactions, the degree of confusion that he may have lost his edge, plus the last two paragraphs that close the story in a very entertaining way! I imagine the vampire in surprise at hearing that!

Very nice!

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