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Meganought t1_j4n54zo wrote

Reply to comment by chacham2 in [WP] You are a supervillain who went undercover as a superhero for jokes, only to discover how corrupt the system is in the hero society. The system is so corrupt that you agree to lead a small group of superheroes to rebel against the unjust hero society. by RavenousOwlhead

Hey, it was great bud! Don't put yourself down

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chacham2 t1_j4n5ktc wrote

Thank you for the compliment, again.

I wrote it too quickly and didn't develop it slowly enough. I don't like how it came out, because i know i could do better, if i gave it more time.

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nevaleigh t1_j4numdk wrote

Loving it so far and it doesn’t seem rushed at all, hoping for a part 3

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chacham2 t1_j4q5dzk wrote

Thank you for the compliment. I rushed out a continuation this morning after trying to figure out what to do. There were so many ways to go, but i wanted to end the story already, so this is what i came up with. I hope it is to your liking.

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