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Aljhaqu t1_j5ju00q wrote

...I need you; as you are my other half, the reason why I get up from bed...

The same hollow dialogue, the same empty girl. Another day I have to deal with this... I click the register, to count the money. The day is nearly ending, and we have to count the bills before transferring the money to the safe and then to the bank. It easy and simple... doesn’t requires extensive formation such as a degree in any professional career.

Perfect for an outcast like me.

...Your schemes to maintain your power in our reality were legendary, why would you leave them for this small existence?...

Again with this verse. Last week you used the same line in order to verbally butter me up to your demands.

It was such a good place my old reality. Rise up, check the field, the people tending them. Go to the mines, make sure the prisoners were still alive... The basics of the “evil” overlord. While I abhor this term, I can reason the reason why said description. It is quite inhumane, but a necessity.

The world needed balance. Too much evil can turn the world in a hellish plane, with “Angels” raining death in order to clean the slate, and start anew.

Too much good... Goodness, you don’t want to know what happens when there was too much good...

...People counted on you for many things, now I see...

Ok, this line is new... I just bother to raise a hand to ask the “heroine”...

What happened? I just ask.

And she coyly looks the other way...

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Snowdog1967 t1_j5kbww1 wrote

This....

Good start.

And then what happens?

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Aljhaqu t1_j5kjkas wrote

Let's say that... you won't like it...

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DragonBoss206 t1_j5lqzjg wrote

Do not take away my ability to be the master of my own fate. Give it to me.

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Aljhaqu t1_j5lrsss wrote

No... most people in the reddit wishes for happy ends as well as certain political stances... This story, which I left stewing (without the dimensional exile part), isn't one of those... and a serious verbal slashing against those...

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DragonBoss206 t1_j5luutk wrote

Happy endings are subjective mate. Political stances also matter very little in fantasy based prompts such as this. You won’t be treated as the next coming of Hitler for a response.

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