WritingGivesYouWings t1_j1wah7u wrote on December 27, 2022 at 9:46 PM

Reply to comment by ZwhoWrites in [WP] You have the peculiar ability to pause time. Nothing can move, including yourself, meaning all you get is time to think. Today you find yourself paused with a bullet right in front of your eyes. by Votbear

I like how human and awkward it feels. Really brings the story to life. Gives it a lot of personality and originality. Great job! Keep up the good work!