Submitted by Cody_Fox23 t3_zj72sn in WritingPrompts
AstroRide t1_j0mhf2i wrote
Reply to comment by rainbow--penguin in [CW] Smash 'Em Up Sunday: Disco by Cody_Fox23
Good story, but I would add more to the middle when they're dancing. The most important of the story is how the MC learns to have fun.
rainbow--penguin t1_j0mitxz wrote
Thanks Astro! I've focused in on the kiss a little more to make that moment of awakening a little clearer.
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