Submitted by 25millionusd t3_ztc8yv in WritingPrompts
Ataraxidermist t1_j1dgsvw wrote
"Do you really love me?"
Does it really need to be said?
Agnes, friendly like a prison door, eyes frozen blue, a smile would crack the smooth ice of her face.
Agnes, having built this persona to protect herself, less of a filter and more of a wall between her and the universe. Bullies, parents unready to be parents, all the little details adding to the necessity and weight of her mask.
Eternal stoicism made it unsurprisingly hard to nurture social contact, and as much as Agnes would prefer to, she was no island. She worked, lived, went by, but loneliness wore her down with each passing year. The pain added to her frozen mask in driving a wedge between herself and people.
So of course, instead of trying harder with online dating and socializing, she turned to the occult.
It was no conscious effort, she didn't set off, free of the material shakles of her mind into the beyond to bring back a mate. But she was wishful for a partner. And when her eyes opened again in the world of humans, she saw a tall, red-haired woman lying next to her. The woman smiled, and in all her perfect humanity, her beauty, her warm empathy, she appeared as the abomination she was to Agnes.
An abomination that had come into existence now, her ties to Agnes a part of her.
Agnes tried to send it back, to ignore it.
You and I, Agnes, you and I. I am Rada.
Rada's lips moved, but her voice was in Agnes's head. Hard to ignore, so was the package she was being offered, containing a severed head.
A bully of old. Caked and coated in blood, a voiceless scream etched on their face. The bully had suffered long before the neck was sliced through. What they had seen and felt was beyond what a human mind could take.
For love.
Agnes dropped the head and ran. Through the streets, through the woods, only to find herself before Rada.
You and I.
"No," she whispered.
Rada held the severed head, dead eyes piercing Agnes with their judgement.
That's when she asked.
"Do you really love me?"
Does it really need to be said?
Agnes took Rada's extended hand, she pulled her into the coldest hug on earth.
Agnes looked for a job, Rada made certain the right person fell sick. She struggled with her peers, Rada devoured them, maw and gullet growing. Larger and larger to swallow them whole, blood running down Rada's face. Then Rada turned, and gave Agnes a pretty human smile.
And more than that, Rada gave Agnes all the little attentions. Flowers, kisses, sweet little nothings obliterating the world around Agnes, leaving only Rada.
Because Agnes had wanted for a happy relationship, a normal, stereotypical relationship with everything a movie has in there. And it was Rada's raison d'être. Now Agnes followed Rada's whims like a puppet. The beast was undying, and it wouldn't let her die either. No more occult. Rada wouldn't let her, she was all the occult she would ever need.
Rada bought the home, bought the ring, and finally, asked for Agnes' hand. Her smile was as warm as a skull's.
Agnes mustered the weakest of "yes," and Rada pulled her in for a kiss with her iron grip, a kiss that smelled like death and murder. Then she kissed her again, more forceful, and again, until she drew blood from Agnes' lips, until Agnes lifted her foot slightly like in the movies.
"Mom, dad, this is my girlfriend," Agnes didn't resist. She had invited hell into a life she didn't like, she couldn't fight it, wouldn't try to.
Mom and dad were hostile, they would never accept a gay daughter. Rada remained polite and smiling.
When they left, Agnes felt she would never see her parents again.
The day came, to say yes at the church. Rada had organized everything.
It was a little church in a village bordering the mountains. Autumn tainted the trees red and golden.
Agnes was in a black car before the church, in a white bridal dress. The doors opened, out came Rada, in a similar dress. She took her by the hand, and led her inside. The doors stayed open.
The place was packed. Everyone was there. Friends, even her parents. She did see them again.
They were held in place with nails, a smile carved on their faces. The priest was pale and gaunt, barely alive as he spoke to the two angelic brides.
"Do you want to take Rada here as wife?"
Agnes, just as pale, could only nod. The corpses in the public cackled and croaked.
"Do you want to take Agnes here as wife?"
"Yes." The warmth in her word could melt off the flesh from a face. The corpses bloated and gurgled as the heat washed over them, dried blood replaced with fresh flowing crimson, the stone floor covered with a shiny coat, wetting the bridal dresses.
"Then I hereby declare you, wife and wife."
The priest's neck cracked, he fell lifeless on the altar. Rada grabbed Agnes' neck with a hand that could crush skulls. The glasspanes shivered.
The corpses burst and applauded with their bony hands, viscera coating floor and walls as Rada's lips approached Agnes'. A storm picked up in that frozen instant, when madness had become the new normal and Agnes' mind was shattered into a thousand glass shards.
A gust of wind slammed the church's door shut right before they kissed.
25millionusd OP t1_j1e8pir wrote
Wow..this was surreal!
Sneaks7 t1_j1fbuse wrote
holy f***
​
Great writing. But my goodness.
Ataraxidermist t1_j1hb49s wrote
Cthulhu is love
MagicTech547 t1_j1gbfr8 wrote
Nice! Didn’t expect an eldritch horror response, but hey; it was good!
Viewing a single comment thread. View all comments