Jufilup t1_iyl5kp3 wrote
The English Professor spun a web so convincing the policemen couldn’t help but pull out their handcuffs.
“Book him boys” Captain Crestwood commanded, and Clyde was led with hands behind his back to the police station, where he was set up in a small interview room.
Clyde held his baseball cap between his knees, counting to five between each stage of breathing. Twinges of gray filled his periphery.
"As I've said, officer, the similarity between the novella and the real events is simple. The novella is based on the murder of Courtney and Wilson Danvers, dramatized from the publicized account. Frankly, it is astonishing that my recounting of it should feel so genuine that I should be called in for questioning. It's almost a compliment, really." A faint smile danced on Clyde's lips, and the officer grimaced.
Yet the policeman continued again, baring down hard as he must on any suspect. Picking apart every aspect of the story, every little bit and piece, every nook and cranny, every apple and every orange, with oddly specific and seemingly meaningless questions.
The old lout clearly believed Clyde, thus Clyde relaxed, and allowed himself to sink deeper into his chair, largely droning out the bleating police captain, who was continuing to scrutinize Clyde's books.
Clyde gave occasional curt utterances, having already made his said, leaving the old, stupid oaf to do his routine police work. After a time he closed his eyes, leaving the old brute to ask his routine questions, to speculate and speak sentences that end with an upward inflection as if they were a question, though no question was spoken.
Police Captain Ashton Crestwood closely monitored the snakelike individual before him, buying none of his casual charm. The copy of Clyde Donavan's most popular book, Morning to Dawn, autographed by Clyde in front of Officer Wood, lay in the trash bin, its personalized message unread.
Captain Crestwood inwardly laughed at Clyde's gusto, the childlike way he leaned back in the seat and lazily closed his eyes. He had already decided the man must be guilty, long before he had met him personally. The evidence was damning, frankly, yet even more important matters were taking precedence.
An easy and quick win was needed.
The town was just coming off the tail end of a vicious streak of robberies, a few of which unfortunately turned poorly, resulting in fatalities and injuries. The police were of no help.
In one instance, an officer responding to a robbery in a particularly nasty part of town shamed the two folks for being so stupid to respond to an inquiry to buy their phone over craigslist. The phone was stolen, and the cop took the opportunity to shame the buyer for their stupidity.
The man gave hard glances around the neighborhood, at the little boys and girls playing on the old playground, at the groups of children with no toys to play with yet the strongest sense of neighborhood bond.
"Do you see where you are?"
The kids didn't know how to respond, and one of them tried to think of the city's name. The cop interrupted.
"No, look around you. Look at this place, does this look like where you live?" The cop gave them a hard stare.
The two teenage kids, with their recently lost phones, took in the scene of the rundown, crappy apartments. One of them noticed a little black boy, maybe six years old, soaking in every word the big police officer said, his face screwed up in sadness.
So after many incidents much like that one, with as much usefulness to the community as that one, the good Police Captain Ashton Crestwood wanted an easy dub.
Thus, Clyde was slapped behind bars, pending further evidence, as his house was ripped bar by bar, shred by shred, while the cops sprinkle cocaine, limbs, blood, whatever evidence is required.
It was not long before Clyde saw that blessed chair, and then his lord. Chief Crestwood received a moderate bonus.
ElZoof t1_iylc04o wrote
I mean it’s okay, but it has almost nothing to do with the prompt other than involving an author? Maybe?
Jufilup t1_iymh8nh wrote
The English teacher alerted authorities who arrested him and the story picks up there… feels like that’s a pretty easy leap to take if I’m being honest.
Surprised by the downvotes and I dislike the precedent set on this sub where if you don’t follow the exact prompt you’re just dismissed.
I basically just subbed the English teacher for the cop and yet somehow that’s entirely different from the prompt?
edit: ty for the “I mean it’s okay”. That totally didn’t feel slightly rude.
HopingToWriteWell77 t1_iymn9it wrote
The point is to write within the confines of the prompt, not substitute parts of it.
The point was, what would an author do if they're stuck reading their own book in a class, with the teacher reading way too much into it?
Jufilup t1_iymrk6c wrote
I respectfully disagree and don’t think that’s the point of a sub about creative writing.
Edited to add: to be clear also I didn’t substitute stuff. In my mind while writing the story, the teacher alerted the authorities who arrested the author and were then questioning him. I get that that may be a small leap but it’s a really simple logical leap given the prompt and what would logically happen if he was actually genuinely suspicious.
Spinjitzu-Master t1_iynrpud wrote
Part of the beauty of this sub's creativity is sticking to a specific prompt. Limiting yourself and seeing how far/how differently other people take it, you know?
Jufilup t1_iynup89 wrote
I really feel like I did stick to the specific prompt, and it was just like what you're saying, a different take on it. Given the vagueness of the prompt what I wrote feels reasonable to me.
The prompt didn't say that it had to be " what would an author do if they're stuck reading their own book in a class, with the teacher reading way too much into it?" as the above poster says.
It says "Annoyingly, your English teacher is reading way too deeply into your books."
My take on that is just as valid as the next person's, and my take was that the english teacher was reading too deeply into murder mysteries, alerted the authorities, and the story picked up there. Is that not just a different take?
yxpeng20 t1_iyolez4 wrote
It looks like you just got unlucky. One of the notes of the bot says "Prompts don't have to fulfill every detail."
There have been many prompts where people deviated and got complaints, but the general agreement has always seemed to be that prompts provide inspiration, not a strict framework. The bot even recommends other subreddits for those who want to see stricter adherence to the prompt.
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