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katpoker666 t1_iwnk1d2 wrote

Reply to comment by Restser in [TT] Theme Thursday - Wholesome by AliciaWrites

I like this thoughtful contemplation on life, Restser. It might be me but it feels more like an essay than a story piece in that there’s a lot of telling but not so much showing.

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Restser t1_iws09ny wrote

Thanks katpoker66 for reading and commenting. You are right about the style. I try to write these pieces in a single pass with a single edit review. I had trouble getting sufficiently close to MC's mind to make this work the way I'd like. There's always next week.

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