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Chevy_Cheyenne t1_ixsvx75 wrote

Thank you so so much!! I intend in future stories to make them more readable -- probably use less adjectives and make the sentences less complex, but I'm glad to see someone enjoyed it nonetheless :D

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Khiadra t1_iy2u0as wrote

I found it beautifully evocative. Almost poetic, but in a visceral way.

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