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RyjeeImages t1_iyezs39 wrote
"If you don't like this, just stop me. Oh wait, you can't. Your star isn't even visible in the night sky."
Catherine taunted as she held Josh upside down in a magic force field. Josh just waited for her to finish, trying to ignore all the blood rushing to his head. Eventually she would get bored, she always did. It didn't stop her from using him to scare anyone new who came to the school. A thin silver haired woman ran up to her and pushed her, and Josh dropped to the ground. Josh looked up at his savior, who was yelling at Catherine about her cold heart. Big mistake. Catherine spun her hand in a circle, and the woman froze in place. Catherine waved her hand, and the woman yelled as she slammed against a nearby statue. A horrifying crunch rang out as the woman went limp and fell to the ground.
"Anyone else want to try? Who wants to fight against the power of Sirius?"
All the other people looked at their feet and stayed quiet. Catherine's star was one of the closest stars to Earth, and her power was unmatched by any known wizard on this continent. The one saving grace for the school was that her skills was unrefined, though she could still brute force anything she put her mind to. She gave out a smug smile and started to walk away. The crowd dissipated after she left.
Josh walked up to the Silver haired woman laying on the ground, staring at her mangled limbs. She was still breathing, which was a good sign. Josh put a hand on her, and felt a tiny sliver of his magic flowing from him to her. Her limbs snapped into place, and the scrapes on her skin cleared up. The black circles under her eyes disappeared, and her body grew a bit as she became a healthy weight. Josh quickly withdrew his hand, he had gone too far with his healing. Her eyes snapped open.
"What just happened?" She exclaimed, as she shot up to a sitting position. "I feel better than I ever have."
"I healed you." Josh stared into her gorgeous eyes, so dark they appeared black like the night sky. "My name is Josh."
"Thank you. My name's Elizabeth." She looked at her arms and legs, then at Josh. "I thought your magic was weak."
"That is what people say. To be fair, you can't see my star in the night sky." Josh got up and started to walk towards his room. He stopped and turned back to Elizabeth. "It was nice meeting you."
"It was nice meeting you too." She said, as she stared at him. She watched him walk away, then glanced up at the hot sun beating down on the courtyard.
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Josh stared at the unlit candle in front of him, focusing with all his might. He focused on simply lighting the candle, then shot out his magic at it.
The candle lit up in a fireball, blinding him. When his vision returned, he looked at the tiny stub remaining. He sighed, and blew out the candle before tossed it to the side. He set up another candle, and started to focus when he heard a knock at the door. He opened it, and Elizabeth walked through before he could even process who it was. She looked around at the burned walls and the pile of spent candles in the corner. Josh stuttered trying to say something, but she spoke first.
"Nice place. Is it okay if I ask you a question?" He nodded. "Why do you let Catherine treat you like that?"
"She has the power of Sirius. No one is able to stand up to her."
Elizabeth looked into Josh's eyes. "No one?"
Josh shifted uncomfortably on his feet, then sat down on the bed. It felt like she was staring into his soul. "Yes, she has the closest star in the night sky."
"What about the day sky?"
Josh's eyes opened wide, before he faked a chuckle. "You can't see stars during the day."
"You can see one." Elizabeth sat down beside him. "And I think there is someone more powerful than her. So let me ask again. Why do you let her treat you like that?"
Josh stared at her, examining her chiseled features. It took a moment for him speak.
"Because I can't control it. I once used it to push away a bully in elementary school. They found his body 15 km away. I only meant to push him a foot. I never meant to- to do that to him." Josh's eyes started to water as he remembered the poor boys mangled body.
Elizabeth looked at him, then put a hand on Josh's shoulder. "That was a long time ago. You must have better control now."
"No. You see that chess board with a missing piece?" Elizabeth looked at the shelf he pointed at and nodded. "Last week I tried to fix the piece with magic, and it became a fully grown tree."
Her jaw dropped, and she stared at him.
"What about all the people she hurts? Surely it must be worth standing up to her for them?"
"Never. I promised myself I would never hurt another human being, no matter what." Josh got off the bed and looked out the window.
"But you have so much power. You could help so many people!"
"You don't get it. I don't have a power, I have a curse. I'm so sorry, but I can't help you." Josh turned and gestured towards the door. "Thank you for visiting, but please leave me alone."
She got up off the bed. "Fine. But if you change your mind and decide to be a good person, let me know."
Josh watched as she walked out the door. He sighed, then started to focus on the candle again.
Edit: part two is out. https://www.reddit.com/r/WritingPrompts/comments/z8wsyf/comment/iyf9hdm/?utm_source=share&utm_medium=web2x&context=3
RoyGBiv1057 t1_iyf4lqf wrote
This deserves a continuation. 👌
XantosZ OP t1_iyf66t5 wrote
This was fantastic, I find the difference in opinion between the two interesting. Saying he’s a bad person for not standing up, but he doesn’t have enough control. No one deserves to die just because they’re a bully, and that’s what would happen if he retaliated.
RyjeeImages t1_iyf9hdm wrote
Josh focused on the candle, and sent out his magic. A large fireball formed again, and this time his bed had been lit on fire too. He quickly patted out the flames, and cursed at himself. Elizabeths words kept ringing through his head. Decide to be a good person. Wasn't he a good person? He was choosing not to kill people. He decided to head out and grab some food.
He reached the mess hall, grabbed a tray and sat down. He was about halfway through when his pudding bowl started to float off his tray. It zoomed over to a table, and Josh saw Catherine sitting there alone summoning several other bowls from other people. One person stood up, but his friend put a hand on his shoulder and he sat back down. Catherine smiled at the two of them, then locked eyes at Josh. A professor walked up to her table and started to say something to her, but without looking she flicked her hand and he flew into another table. Josh got up and walked out.
He arrived at Elizabeths door a little later, and weakly knocked. She opened the door, suprised to see him, and gestured inside. He sat down on her bed and hung his head.
"Do you really think I'm a bad person?"
She moved next to the bed. "You have the ability to stop her and help people, and you choose not to."
"I could kill her."
"She would have killed me if you hadn't been there. Do you think she cares about that?"
Josh looked up her. "I don't want to hurt anyone. Is there a way to stop her without hurting her?"
Elizabeth sat down beside him and thought for a minute. "What about if you scare her? You know, show off your power and put the fear of god into her. Make her think twice before bothering you or anyone else?"
Josh thought for a moment then nodded. It was getting late, so the two of them agreed to figure this out tomorrow.
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The next day Josh was at breakfast when Catherine walked in. She got up on a table, then put her fingers on her head. Josh and everyone in the room got a mental message. The floor is Lava. Josh jumped on the table with everyone else, and looked down at the melting floor. He then looked up at Catherine doubling over in laughter. The conversation from the previous night went through his head. Josh put his fingers on his head, and sent her a message. Stop.
Catherine froze in place. The floor slowly started to return to normal, but she stood there mid laugh not moving a muscle. He jumped down from the table, and others started to jump down too. Josh walked over to Catherine, and looked up at her face. Though she still looked like she was laughing, her eyes showed she was panicing inside.
"I'm sorry, I only wanted to send you a message." Her eyes turned from panic to anger. Josh turned and ran out the door as a professor walked up to the frozen woman. He ran behind a statue and collapsed onto the ground. A few minutes later Elizabeth found him there crying.
"Look what I did to her!" Josh screamed at the approaching woman. "Who knows if she will ever be okay!"
Elizabeth sighed and sat down next to him. "If it makes you feel better, shes gone from laughing to snarling. And she has the ability to threaten people again. If anything, your mind control wasn't strong enough."
"But I didn't even try to control her. All I did was tell her to stop." Josh stopped talking as he felt himself rise off the ground. He looked over to see Catherine storming over with one hand raised.
"What did you do to me you bastard!" Catherine screamed at him.
"I sent you a message! I swear that was it!" Josh screamed back. A crowd had started to form, and Josh saw several professors as well as Headmaster Ahagan standing nearby. Catherine looked around at the crowd, then threw Josh to the ground. She leaned close to him, and whispered:
"Better watch your back. You are fucking dead you little brat."
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Part three here: https://www.reddit.com/r/WritingPrompts/comments/z8wsyf/comment/iyfgon6/?utm_source=share&utm_medium=web2x&context=3
RyjeeImages t1_iyf9l33 wrote
CoruptedUsername t1_iyfaoao wrote
Do you plan on continuing this further?
RyjeeImages t1_iyfbdda wrote
I hope to, I just gotta come up with something interesting for part 3. Not sure whats gonna happen.
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