HongerBongers t1_ixfkn2l wrote
Reply to comment by HongerBongers in [WP] You are a vampire hunter. Your roommate is a vampire. Neither of you can afford the apartment on your own so if one of you attacks the other you'll lose the apartment. The tension between you two is increasing by the day. by john_snape_
Adam stood, hunched in a fighting stance, his back to me.
I was speechless.
“We’ll talk about what an idiot you are later. But for now, get in the churchyard.”
When I didn’t move fast enough, he shouted. “Move!”
I didn’t protest.
I hopped the fence, landing next to a tombstone. A bronze angel stared down at me, arms outstretched, the oxidized metal like tear streaks down its face.
As useless as it was, I held my gun out, pointing at the guy Adam was facing off against.
It was the creep who chased the girl. His nice shirt drenched in blood.
“You’re boring.” He said to Adam. He smoothed his hair back like his hands weren’t caked in gore. Behind him, the three other vampires fanned out, surrounding us. “I’d ask if you wanted to have it for yourself, but Silas tells me you’ve gone soft.”
I guess I was the “it”. Fucking creature.
I gestured my gun at the vamp talking. “I got a stake about your size. Extra large, unlubed.”
“Shut it.” Adam snapped at me. Then he turned to face the leader of the posse. “I’m going to take her and go. You’re already outside your territory. Don’t turn this shit into an incident because you got some human blood for once, Eli.”
The one he called Eli smirked. “She’s seen us, we can’t just let her go.”
“You always were the dumbest in the brood, weren’t you?” said Adam. “Use your head. Kill a hunter and the rest of them will come down on this place like hellfire. Or need I remind you what happened last time? You’ll all need to change jobs. Those of you that survive, anyway.”
“She doesn’t have the symbol.” Eli protested.
“Yes, because every hunter is going to walk around advertising who they are for our benefit.”
Eli paused. You could almost see the gears turning in his head.
The three underlings watch him, tensed and waiting for orders.
Adam stands resolute, and only then did I notice the massive claws at the ends of his flexed fingers.
Then. Eli nods, a small smirk splitting his face. “We’ll let this slide for now. But Silas is gonna want you to explain this.”
“I’m not taking orders.” said Adam. His shoulders squared a little more.
Then, in the clock tower above us, five chimes rang out. Sunrise was coming.
Eli looked a little ruffled. “Silas is gonna find out you were in his territory - and that you interfered.”
“You can tell him to get bent.”
And with that, the three lackeys melted away into the shadows. Eli was the last to leave, sneering at both of us.
“See you later.”
I wanted to relax, to unlock my arms and release the death grip I had on my pistol. But as Adam turned to me, my blood ran cold.
He had a rage in his eyes that I’d never seen anyone have before or since. And they were red, his eyes. Like a pair of ruby coals burning underneath pale lashes.
“You are going to go home. You are not going to run. We are going to have a little chat.”
It wasn’t vampiric compulsion, but I knew I should obey. For one, he just saved my life. Two, we had lived for weeks together and he didn’t so much as sniff my direction. Three - if Silas was the guy from the porch… I’d rather have backup.
So, I just agreed. “What about you?”
“Hmm?”
“Sun’s coming up.”
“Oh, right.” He said, almost as an afterthought.“Don’t worry your pretty little neck. I’ll get home fine. You just get straight there - and don’t let anyone in.”
“Are you my dad?” I snorted.
It was a stupid, childish insult. But it had been a weird night.
“Considering you do things you are told not to, perhaps you need one.” He frowned. And with that, he slipped away behind a building.
I stayed in the churchyard until the first few rays of sunlight brushed the sky, pink and gold and glorious.
Better safe than sorry.
———-(continued)———-
Taking a break for the day. Burned out my eyes typing this. Honestly didn’t expect to write this much. Ty for reading!
Edit 2: Thank you so much for reading! I will be putting up more parts soon, had a lot of stuff to do today. Really appreciate the kindness <3
HongerBongers t1_ixock6l wrote
So, remember how I said something about knowing crazy vampire slayers?
I meant Buffy.
The revelation that there were people aside from me out killing vamps shouldn’t have been as shocking as it was. Vampires exist, of course there would be people to fight them.
The knowledge weighed heavy on me with the rest of the night.
I didn’t know what I was thinking. Adam was right. I am an idiot. If he hadn’t come, I would have ended up just like that girl - or that poor man in the bush.
Then again… why did he follow me?
The bus arrived early into dawn. The driver didn’t make much of my appearance, probably used to seeing beat up, worn out weirdos on the reg. I just sat in the back and fought the urge to sleep. Every street that passed I expected to see eyes in the shadows.
There were so many of them. I’d never seen a whole pack before, let alone sentient ones.
What did I even think I was doing? I was like animal control. Worse than animal control - at least they had a hotline. I just walked around in the dark, hoping to come across a monster. Why did I never consider they’d come in packs? What did I think I was going to do against the smart ones?
I needed help.
Every time I blinked, the sights and sounds came back to me. The blood, the screams. Needless death. And they liked to kill. Think it’s fun to chase, to torture. It’s not just a meal for the smart ones. It’s sport.
I scraped together what information I gathered. Now, it wasn’t about preventing these things from hurting people. It was survival.
First- Adam. Unknown variable. Could have killed me at any point, but saved me from being murdered. Could want to take me out when I get back.
Second - Eli and his group. Family? Coven? I never learned what to call a flock of vampires. Regardless, he wanted me dead. Sounded like there were rules. Territory? Did the hunters have territory?
Third - Silas. A vampire hierarchy made sense, but the way they talked about Silas set another stone to my gut. The lore never mentioned that bloodsuckers could get this organized. Eli made him sound like a mafia boss. Maybe this whole vampire collective thing happened recently. You don’t exactly think gangster when you look at Nosferatu.
Then, finally- The decapitator. Phantom, invisible thing. Whatever was out there slicing up heads, it followed me. And let me get away. Twice. Whatever it was, it put a fear in my bones that hadn’t existed since my caveman ancestors. The fear of a monster you can’t can’t see, can’t fight. And it’s way more powerful than you.
My phone buzzed and I dug it out of my pocket. It was Adam.
“When you get off the bus, go through the park. Don’t take the same route home.”
My stop was next. I should have guessed he knew where I was.
It was well into the morning when I made it to the park, though the safety of daylight didn’t stop me from hiding a stake up my sleeve. My shoes were soaked from the morning dew. I didn’t take the trail, opting to cut through the small copse of trees straight to my street.
Even all the way out here, those missing fliers were stapled to every other tree, the ink bleeding into a tie-dye mess from the humidity. Still, I could make out the image of the little boy in every flier. Smiling, holding a soccer ball. His parents must have died a little more each day he wasn’t found.
The thought was another knife-twist to my already raw emotional state.
I’m not ashamed to say I cried the rest of the way back.
My cheeks were dry by the time I got to the porch, though my eyes stung and my nose was puffy.
But I knew shit wasn’t over yet. I scrubbed my face with my sleeve as I fumbled with my keys. The door was already unlocked. That wasn’t good.
My body squeezed my adrenal glands for what little juice they had left. I was an animal who had been hunted all night and barely had any conscious thought anymore. Trap. Fight.
I slipped the stake from my sleeve, clutching it close as I nudged the door open.
As expected, it was dark inside. The dim fluorescent light in the hallway was off, and none of the lamps were on further inside. I crept into the hall, but kept the door cracked behind me.
My senses dialed up again. Every creak of the old floorboards rang out like a gunshot.
I peered around the corner into the living room. Nothing. Then to my left. Adam’s door was open… and so was mine.
Then - The door slammed shut behind me. It was pure instinct. I whipped around, one arm blocking me in front, the other raised the stake high.
Adam leaned against the door, arms folded over his chest. To say he looked unimpressed wasn’t accurate. He looked downright disappointed.
“If it was your intention to stab me, you might want to use the pointy end.”
I glanced up at my hand. The stake was backwards.
“It’s been a rough night.” I huffed, lowering my arm. “I’m not usually this inept.”
I don’t know why I felt the need to defend myself.
The corner of his mouth tipped up in a smirk. “Having performance problems, are we?”
The tease caught me off guard, but the childish part of my brain threw out a retort before I could think better of it. “I’ve never had a problem getting it in. Become quite an expert over the years.”
“That’s what they all say.”
Yep. I was trading innuendos with my vampire roommate. Fantastic.
“But really,” said Adam, his charming face suddenly growing stone serious. “I had thought you knew better than to run off to a den by yourself. I’d long suspected you weren’t part of that little cult, but your foolishness all but proved it.”
“Hang on,” I held up a hand while my brain tried to catch up. “You knew I was hunting va- I mean, your kind?”
“Oh yes,” the smirk came back. Maybe more of a sneer, it was difficult to tell in the low light. “You think I wouldn’t investigate a stranger coming to rent my room?”
I squinted, struggling to work out how he would do that. I don’t have social media, or much of an online presence to speak of in general. That could only mean …
“You’ve been spying on me?”
He clicked his teeth. “I’d call it investigating, but that’s neither here nor there.”
“Why?” I blinked, incredulous. “Why let me live here? Why let me live in general? You could have torn out my throat at any point.”
“Curiosity.” He shrugged. Then, his teeth flashed through his widening smile. “There are only two kinds of women who would hunt alone. The fools and those with a death wish. I haven’t quite figured out which you are.”
“That doesn’t answer my question.”
“Doesn’t it?” He said, his voice pitched low, nearly a purr. It make the skin up my back prickle. “Why would I kill you? It’s far more entertaining watching you fight to survive. Every brainless thrall you took down, you learned something. Got a little more clever.”
I frowned. I should have been angry, but for some reason I was more embarrassed knowing my work was being judged from the shadows this whole time. “I can’t imagine you’d consider me a threat.”
“Not yet.” He said. “But you were getting there.”
“Then, why have me be your room mate?”
Adam looked far too pleased with himself. “Entertainment.”
He pushed off the door and stepped towards me; I took a step back. I had to crane my neck to look up at him, was he always that tall?
“The fact I had you within arms reach for weeks and you never suspected a thing, well.” He laughed. “That was rather amusing.”
“Now hang on.” I snapped. “I had my suspicions, I just didn’t want to say anything without proof.”
“I mean, I didn’t exactly hide it.”
“Don’t rub it in.”
“The sunglasses, the mirror, the meat-“
“Okay!”
My back hit the wall, and he gave me enough grace to allow a few feet of distance between us. Still, he could probably smell the rise in my blood pressure, or something equally creepy and unnatural.
“I didn’t want to just come out and assume you were a vampire. I thought I was being paranoid.” I put my hands on my hips, a futile effort to regain some composure. “You could have been, like, an albino or something.”
Then he laughed. Loud. Obnoxious. He didn’t even try to contain his amusement. He was suspiciously out of breath, considering he wasn’t, you know, alive. But when he finished, he made a dramatic show of wiping non-existent tears from his eyes. “You would really ignore every red flag in order not to appear rude.” He sighed. “That’s adorable.”
“Adorable?” I had it. All the exhaustion, all the fear- everything burned away, replaced by indignant pride. “Well, excuse me for trying to have some sense of decorum. For a vampire, you don’t seem to have the best sense of self preservation either, because I was an inch from staking you at any given moment.”
“Oh, you wouldn’t.” He drawled.
I thrust the stake up between us. “What would you do if I did?”
Adam just smiled, but there was no warmth in the expression. He closed the gap between us, looking down his nose at me, hands in his pockets. “Go ahead.” He murmured. “I won’t bite.”
Bastard. My heart was racing in my ears, and it took me far too long to realize I’d stopped breathing.
Adam bent down, his lips inches from my ear. “I thought so.”
I pressed the stake into his chin. “Back. Up.” I struggled to keep my tone even, hardly able to raise my voice above a whisper.
I could hear the smile in his voice. “There she is.”
He never touched me, but he didn’t have to. His words, his posture, his voice - I knew I was outmatched.
I kept pressure to the stake at his chin until he backed out of reach. He just stared at me, hands in his pockets, wry amusement etched in the shadow of his mouth. It was like staring down a hungry lion at the zoo, but without the comfort of bulletproof glass. My whole body screamed at me to run, but I stood my ground.
“I think I know what sort of woman you are.” He mused, his ruby eyes scanning my body from head to toe. “Good. You’re going to have a hard fight ahead.”
“Why?”
“It’s something best discussed over a drink.”
——(continued)——
HongerBongers t1_ixsfd7p wrote
Hey everyone, thanks for reading!
I decided that I was having so much fun with the story that I want to make it a little more accessible. Reddit’s comment system is a strange, difficult way to tell stories. Eventually it gets a little hard to find stuff.
So, over the next few days I will be editing, polishing, and posting the chapters to r/nosleep
Thank you so much to everyone who has taken the time to read. More content is coming!
AnonymousNeko2828 t1_ixtpzyt wrote
Could you tell me when the story is finished moving?
humble_nomad t1_ixtt3oj wrote
What will it be titled so we can search for it in the subreddit?
JJGrim08 t1_ixuaa8v wrote
Would love to be notified when this is up. I'm absolutely hooked
AnonymousNeko2828 t1_ixpap46 wrote
I. LOVE. IT.
Tell me when more? :]
HongerBongers t1_ixsflag wrote
I’m so happy you enjoy the story! Here’s an update about what’s coming.
Everything will be sorted out and more legible moving over to r/NoSleep
https://reddit.com/r/WritingPrompts/comments/z1ktv3/_/ixsfd7p/?context=1
AnonymousNeko2828 t1_ixtpy0s wrote
Alright! Thanks for telling me!
humble_nomad t1_ixg1lzu wrote
PLEASE let me know when you update! Do you write for a living? I wish I could just pay $30 and read this as a book! This is fantastic!
HongerBongers t1_ixoctli wrote
Ding! Should have more up today too. Then you for reading! And I hope to write a book someday, this just turned out to be a really fun prompt and I got carried away with it xD
humble_nomad t1_ixofh31 wrote
YAY!!! Thanks so much!! I've struggled reading books from start to finish the past few years due to my ADHD, but you've got me hooked!
HongerBongers t1_ixsfshm wrote
Hey I get that, I have ADHD too! It can be really hard for me to sit down and read- but for some reason writing is a little more engaging xD
Thank you for reading!
Here’s a quick update. Everything will be sorted out and more legible moving over to r/NoSleep
In case you don’t get notified of my comment: https://reddit.com/r/WritingPrompts/comments/z1ktv3/_/ixsfd7p/?context=1
sarcasmabounding t1_ixg38n7 wrote
Let me know when the next part is up, please!
HongerBongers t1_ixocq6s wrote
Ding! Should have more up today too.
AnonymousNeko2828 t1_ixggvxp wrote
Its amazing! Please tell me again tommorow when you continue!
HongerBongers t1_ixocok5 wrote
Ding! Should have more up today too. Thank you for reading :)
AnonymousNeko2828 t1_ixp9inw wrote
Thanks for telling me! And thank YOU for writing this
smallbeans102 t1_ixkf1zd wrote
This is incredible I'd love to read more if you decide to write any
HongerBongers t1_ixocmkq wrote
Ding! Should have more up today too.
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