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Squidwina t1_ixxl1t8 wrote on November 27, 2022 at 4:04 AM

Reply to comment by popejubal in [WP] The . . . creature . . . has been following you for weeks now, but nobody else can see it. It just sits there, staring, grinning. Then one day you look across the coffee shop and see a young woman with another one right behind her. Your eyes meet . . . by ImmortalJadeEye

Agreed. I enjoyed a lot of the little details you put in. They made the story come to life.