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DragonLordAcar t1_ixv7kbs wrote

Reply to comment by CrazyCatShan in [WP] The . . . creature . . . has been following you for weeks now, but nobody else can see it. It just sits there, staring, grinning. Then one day you look across the coffee shop and see a young woman with another one right behind her. Your eyes meet . . . by ImmortalJadeEye

An easy way to improve this is to space each quote. If you wrote this on mobile, you need to “enter” twice for the space to appear for some reason.

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Icefrisbee t1_ixxiwdj wrote

If it’s mobile it’s typically return not enter

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